如何處理好托福寫作開頭段
托福寫作中，如果能開個(gè)好頭，肯定能給自己的托福作文增添不少分?jǐn)?shù)。下面為大家整理寫好托福寫作開頭的六種方式，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助。
托福寫作開頭段的應(yīng)對(duì)方法
我們可以采用以下幾種方式：
1. 采用統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字引出話題，把問題呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前;
2. 提出有爭(zhēng)議性的問題，激發(fā)讀者興趣，使其積極參與討論;
3. 以新穎的觀點(diǎn)，吸引讀者注意力;
4. 呈現(xiàn)該話題正反方的觀點(diǎn);
6. 對(duì)將要討論的話題進(jìn)行定義。
其次，要善于運(yùn)用復(fù)合句，從而使引言段簡(jiǎn)潔明了，開宗明義。下面我們將探討雅思與新托福各種題材和體裁文章引言段的寫作方法。 引用數(shù)據(jù)呈現(xiàn)討論的話題，說(shuō)明問題的嚴(yán)重性或者重要性，引起讀者的關(guān)注。下面我們結(jié)合幾道雅思和新托福作文話題進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練。
我們?cè)趯戧P(guān)于體罰的話題文章時(shí)，可以這樣開頭：It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father" Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.(據(jù)報(bào)道，在父親節(jié)那天，珠海有個(gè)小男孩被老爸揍死了。充分的證據(jù)也顯示，經(jīng)常遭父母或老師虐待的小孩往往比較內(nèi)向、悲觀、冷漠甚至厭世。近來(lái)，關(guān)于是否應(yīng)該廢除體罰出現(xiàn)了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論，老師、家長(zhǎng)和專家各執(zhí)一詞。)
而我們?cè)趯戧P(guān)于該不該禁煙的話題時(shí)，可以這樣開頭：A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight. (中山大學(xué)最近做的一個(gè)研究表明，在過去五年里，吸煙者人數(shù)急劇上升。研究結(jié)果同時(shí)顯示，吸煙導(dǎo)致的疾病發(fā)病率也急劇增長(zhǎng)。因此，禁煙成了個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題。)
托福寫作：攻克獨(dú)立寫作開頭段
尚未取得理想托福成績(jī)的寶寶們還要繼續(xù)戰(zhàn)斗哦，XDF老師們一直陪著大家~ 該報(bào)名的報(bào)名，該報(bào)班的報(bào)班，咱們先來(lái)立個(gè)flag，新年伊始，學(xué)會(huì)快速構(gòu)思出一個(gè)完美的獨(dú)立寫作開頭段。
首先，回顧一下5分作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
? effectively addresses the writing task
? is well organized and well developed
? use clearly appropriate details to support a thesis
? displays consistent facility in the use of language
? demonstrates syntactic variety and appropriate word choice, thoughit may have occasional errors
這三大塊的要求(organization, development, language use)對(duì)于Introduction的意義在于：1)作文必須有一個(gè)開頭段(這樣才完整呀，就像剛認(rèn)識(shí)一個(gè)小伙伴，總要問一下“你的名字是?”) 2)好的開頭段要做到引出話題和明確表明作者的態(tài)度。(也許問“你的名字”并不是一個(gè)搭訕的好方式，那怎么辦?)
來(lái)個(gè)例子吧~ 下文是TPO10的綜合寫作閱讀文章，沒錯(cuò)!寫作雖然分為兩個(gè)tasks，但都是英語(yǔ)寫作呀~ 筆者一直認(rèn)為這兩篇作文可以一起提高，綜合寫作就是美國(guó)人寫的議論分析文章哇~ 接下來(lái)，帶著大家分析這個(gè)開頭段，同時(shí)解答如下幾個(gè)問題：
1) 能不能一開始就寫“I agree with the statement.”/“I think ….”?
2) 題目里的文字我就抄一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)，一丟丟……就一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)，可以嗎?
3) 多少字為宜?
The sea otter is a small mammal that lives in watersalong the western coast of North America from California to Alaska.(看了第一句，能猜出作者觀點(diǎn)嗎?當(dāng)然不能，但是我們可以知道這篇文章一定是關(guān)于 seaotter 這個(gè)話題的。)When some sea otter populations off the Alaskan coaststarted rapidly declining a few years ago, it caused much concern because seaotters play an important ecological role in the coastal ecosystem. Expertsstarted investigating the cause of the decline and quickly realized that there were two possible explanations:environmental pollution or attacks by predators.(兩個(gè)可能的原因，這是可以被質(zhì)疑被反駁的“觀點(diǎn)”哦) Initially, the pollution hypothesis seemed the morelikely of the two.(作者的態(tài)度明顯就是支持 pollution hypothesis)
到了答疑時(shí)間：
1)第一句話建議大家先引入話題，不要直接簡(jiǎn)單粗暴地寫“我覺得……”。除非，你打字速度慢到擔(dān)心后面寫不完……(這種情況下，XDF老師們也有專門幫大家提高打英文速度的方法喲)
2)背景句一般是一個(gè)現(xiàn)象，接下來(lái)就要針對(duì)這個(gè)話題提出一個(gè)爭(zhēng)論點(diǎn)。大多數(shù)時(shí)候，考生會(huì)在此時(shí)選擇改寫題目。問題來(lái)了，5分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的“demonstrates syntactic variety and appropriate word choice”就需要大家做到表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且不能重復(fù)。
3)最后必須給出作者的觀點(diǎn)，至于用I think還是In myopinion都不重要，重要的還是這句話整體寫的如何。如果有一個(gè)短語(yǔ)100%比In my opinion更好，并且100%能拿高分，我想這早就不會(huì)是一個(gè)秘密了。希望寶寶們注重提高語(yǔ)言能力!而不是機(jī)械地背短語(yǔ)。
4)整篇文章字?jǐn)?shù)要求是300以上，個(gè)人建議開頭段字?jǐn)?shù)在40-60個(gè)。(個(gè)別打字狂人且腦洞太大的，你想多寫一些我也不攔著。)
托福寫作開頭的六種方式
1. 采用統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字引出話題，把問題呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前;
2. 提出有爭(zhēng)議性的問題，激發(fā)讀者興趣，使其積極參與討論;
3. 以新穎的觀點(diǎn)，吸引讀者注意力;
4. 呈現(xiàn)該話題正反方的觀點(diǎn);
5. 引用名人名言、諺語(yǔ)等作為文章的開頭;
6. 對(duì)將要討論的話題進(jìn)行定義。
其次，要善于運(yùn)用復(fù)合句，從而使引言段簡(jiǎn)潔明了，開宗明義。下面我們將探討雅思與新托福各種題材和體裁文章引言段的寫作方法。 引用數(shù)據(jù)呈現(xiàn)討論的話題，說(shuō)明問題的嚴(yán)重性或者重要性，引起讀者的關(guān)注。下面我們結(jié)合幾道雅思和新托福作文話題進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練。
我們?cè)趯戧P(guān)于體罰的話題文章時(shí)，可以這樣開頭：It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father' Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.(據(jù)報(bào)道，在父親節(jié)那天，珠海有個(gè)小男孩被老爸揍死了。充分的證據(jù)也顯示，經(jīng)常遭父母或老師虐待的小孩往往比較內(nèi)向、悲觀、冷漠甚至厭世。近 來(lái)，關(guān)于是否應(yīng)該廢除體罰出現(xiàn)了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論，老師、家長(zhǎng)和專家各執(zhí)一詞。)
而我們?cè)谕懈懽鲗戧P(guān)于該不該禁煙的話題時(shí)，可以這樣開頭：A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight. (中山大學(xué)最近做的一個(gè)研究表明，在過去五年里，吸煙者人數(shù)急劇上升。研究結(jié)果同時(shí)顯示，吸煙導(dǎo)致的疾病發(fā)病率也急劇增長(zhǎng)。因此，禁煙成了個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題。)
托福綜合寫作的開頭段模板
托福綜合寫作模板：開頭段寫作模板
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