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雅思寫作改錯(cuò)練習(xí)(附答案)
1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
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1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
錯(cuò)誤: and并列連接兩個(gè)謂語，應(yīng)該是平行結(jié)構(gòu)。所以attempts應(yīng)該改為attempted.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
錯(cuò)誤: 培養(yǎng)良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
錯(cuò)誤: For a group of remaining in existence應(yīng)該是For a group to remain in existence.只有后者才可以做一個(gè)目的狀語。produces應(yīng)該是produce，因?yàn)樵诓迦胝Zin the long run的前邊有must.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation， we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
錯(cuò)誤: For a result of應(yīng)該是As a result of.介詞搭配不當(dāng).
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
錯(cuò)誤: should be encourage應(yīng)該是should be encouraged,情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài). dependence in應(yīng)該是dependence on, 介詞搭配不當(dāng).
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
錯(cuò)誤: their advocates應(yīng)該是its advocates. Its在這里指代的是a new movement in art.所以不能是their.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
錯(cuò)誤: efficiently services應(yīng)該是efficient services. 這也是許多學(xué)生經(jīng)常犯的一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤。副詞不能修飾名詞，必須得改為形容詞。
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
錯(cuò)誤: organizing around a basically private-enterprise應(yīng)該是organized around a basically private-enterprise.這里應(yīng)該是過去分詞來做一個(gè)伴隨狀語，而不應(yīng)該是現(xiàn)在分詞，因?yàn)樗侵髡Z的承受者。in that應(yīng)該是in which.因?yàn)橹挥衖n which才能引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語從句。in which=where, 在引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語從句時(shí)，后面需要加上一個(gè)完整句。而in that只能引導(dǎo)一個(gè)狀語從句=because.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
錯(cuò)誤: which應(yīng)該是that.與前面的it is構(gòu)成一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。強(qiáng)調(diào)原句中的主語。
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
錯(cuò)誤: one information應(yīng)該是one piece of information. 因?yàn)閕nformation是不可數(shù)名詞，前面必須加量詞修飾。[CKQ]
11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your "wares" and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japan’s 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australia’s Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view.
16 "The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them." Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people.
17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows
18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools.
19 The "shareholders" as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good.
20 During the discussion of rock singing verses at last month's stockholders' meeting, Levin assert that "music is not the cause of society's ills" and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students.
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11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your "wares" and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner.
錯(cuò)誤: While talking to you在這里沒錯(cuò)。當(dāng)主句的主語和狀語從句的指代的是同一個(gè)人或物時(shí)，狀語從句的主語可以省略，這就是狀語從句省略結(jié)構(gòu)。your could-be employers is應(yīng)該是your could-be employers are.否則主謂不一致。pay him應(yīng)該是pay him or her.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japan’s 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
錯(cuò)誤: 119 million citizens lives應(yīng)該是119 million citizens live. 否則主謂不一致。which應(yīng)該是where或in which. which引導(dǎo)的定語從句應(yīng)該是一個(gè)不完整的句子，where或in which的后面才能加上一個(gè)完整句
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australia’s Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
錯(cuò)誤: whom wish to die應(yīng)該是who wish to die. whom引導(dǎo)的定語從句應(yīng)該是一個(gè)不完整的句子，whom在定語從句中只能做賓語。而在who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，who既可以做主語，也可以做賓語。
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
錯(cuò)誤: Indicate應(yīng)該是indicates.因?yàn)樵摼涞闹髡Z是The great interest。否則主謂不一致。whatever his special conditions應(yīng)該是whatever their special conditions. Their在這里指代all citizens。
15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view.
錯(cuò)誤: must be relevant with應(yīng)該是must be relevant to. 介詞搭配不當(dāng).
16 "The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them." Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people.
錯(cuò)誤: This view has been shared now應(yīng)該是This view is shared now或者This view is now being shared.已經(jīng)有了明確的時(shí)間狀語now，所以這里只能用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或者現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。
17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows
錯(cuò)誤: The current passion to應(yīng)該是The current passion for. 介詞搭配不當(dāng). produce應(yīng)該是produces，因?yàn)樵摼湓挼闹髡Z是The current passion。否則主謂不一致。
18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools.
錯(cuò)誤: improving techniques and tools應(yīng)該是improved techniques and tools.用過去分詞或現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語時(shí)，要注意它們與被修飾名詞的關(guān)系。這里講得是被改進(jìn)過的技術(shù)和工具，所以應(yīng)該是improved techniques and tools而不是improving techniques and tools。
19 The "shareholders" as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good.
錯(cuò)誤: employing by the company應(yīng)該是employed by the company.過去分詞做后置定語時(shí)，相當(dāng)于一個(gè)省略了的定語從句。所以這里的employed by the company相當(dāng)于who are employed by the company. he hold shares應(yīng)該是they hold shares.因?yàn)檫@里的they指代的是The "shareholders"。his influence on the relations應(yīng)該是their influences on the relations. Their在這里也是指代The "shareholders"。
20 During the discussion of rock singing verses at last month's stockholders' meeting, Levin assert that "music is not the cause of society's ills" and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students.
錯(cuò)誤: and并列連接兩個(gè)謂語，應(yīng)該是平行結(jié)構(gòu)。 assert應(yīng)該是asserted.
雅思寫作：中國雅思寫作教與學(xué)的重大誤區(qū)
雅斯題目要求中有句話：用你自己的觀點(diǎn)和經(jīng)歷。這句話的目的不是要你寫： I think 或者 In my opinion。不能用文字來表示這是你的觀點(diǎn)，要通過合理合邏輯的論述。這話的目的是不讓你背誦別人的觀點(diǎn)，例如教材上的觀點(diǎn)，而且不要在考場上作弊，別抄襲其他考生的話語。
英文議論文的大禁忌就是：使用 I,you,me,he,she,him,her,his,my,your,hers,mine，等等此類第一人稱單數(shù)，第三人稱單數(shù)和第二人稱。就是不能用某具體人來舉例。
更不要寫什么： Do you think ...? I don't think so.而幾乎百分之百的教師和學(xué)生不知道這一個(gè)禁忌，因?yàn)樗麄兌紱]有在英美寫作教學(xué)研究專家的指導(dǎo)下學(xué)習(xí)過寫作。
實(shí)際上，不只是華人，就是英國很多語言學(xué)校的教師也不懂。雖然判卷子的人也都未必懂，但是你寫出那樣的文章他看這就不順眼，當(dāng)然他說不出為什么，但是不會(huì)高看你一眼，而會(huì)低看你幾眼。大家可以試驗(yàn)一下，不使用這些詞，看看還會(huì)不會(huì)說話?會(huì)不會(huì)造句?一開始會(huì)不知所措，習(xí)慣了之后，你的作文和口語就都飛躍了。
雅思寫作：雅思寫作常見錯(cuò)誤經(jīng)典總結(jié)
一. 不一致(disagreements)
所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，它還包括了數(shù)的不一致 時(shí)態(tài)不一致及代詞不一 致等.
例1. when one have money ,he can do what he want to .
(人一旦有了錢，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是單數(shù)第三人稱，因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has ;同理，want應(yīng)改為wants.本句是典型的主謂不一致.
改為： once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
二. 修飾語錯(cuò)位(misplaced modifiers)
英語與漢語不同，同一個(gè)修飾語置于句子不同的位置，句子的含義可能引起變化.對(duì)于這一點(diǎn)中國學(xué)生往往沒有引起足夠的重視，因而造成了不必要的誤解.例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析：better位置不當(dāng)，應(yīng)置于句末.
三. 句子不完整(sentence fragments)
在口語中，交際雙方可借助手勢語氣上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是書面語就不同了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會(huì)令意思表達(dá)不清，這種情況常常發(fā)生在主句寫完以后，筆者又想加些補(bǔ)充說明時(shí)發(fā)生.
例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分"for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一個(gè)完整的句子，僅為一些不連貫的詞語，不能獨(dú)立成句.
改為：there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.
四. 懸垂修飾語(dangling modifiers)
所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清.例如：at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 這句中"at the age of ten"只點(diǎn)出十歲時(shí)，但沒有說明” 誰”十歲時(shí).按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我們把這個(gè)懸垂修飾語改明確一點(diǎn)，全句就不那么費(fèi)解了.
改為：
when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析：句中不定式短語 “to do well in college” 的邏輯主語不清楚.
改為：
to do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五. 詞性誤用(misuse of parts of speech)
“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等.
例1. none can negative the importance of money.
剖析：negative 系形容詞，誤作動(dòng)詞。
改為：
none can deny the importance of money.
六. 指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清，或者先后所用的代詞不一致。試看下面這一句：
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(瑪麗和我姐姐很要好，因?yàn)樗鏊陌槟铩?
讀完上面這一句話，讀者無法明確地判斷兩位姑娘中誰將結(jié)婚，誰將當(dāng)伴娘。如果我們把易于引起誤解的代詞的所指對(duì)象加以明確，意思就一目了然了。這個(gè)句子可改為：
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析：句中人稱代詞we 和反身代詞yourself指代不一致。改為：
we can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七. 不間斷句子(run-on sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?請看下面的例句。
例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析：這個(gè)句子包含了兩層完整的意思：“there are many ways.” 以及“we get to know the outside world.”。簡單地把它們連在一起就不妥當(dāng)了。
改為：
there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：
there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world
八. 措詞毛病(troubles in diction)
diction 是指在特定的句子中怎樣適當(dāng)?shù)剡x用詞語的問題，囿于教學(xué)時(shí)間緊迫，教師平時(shí)在這方面花的時(shí)間往往極其有限，影響了學(xué)生在寫作中沒有養(yǎng)成良好的推敲，斟酌的習(xí)慣。他們往往隨心所欲，拿來就用。所以作文中用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤比比皆是。
例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(農(nóng)業(yè)方面化學(xué)物質(zhì)使用的不斷增加也造成了污染。)
剖析：顯然，考生把obstacles“障礙”，“障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。另外“the increasing use (不斷增加的使用)” 應(yīng)改為“abusive use (濫用)”。
改為：
the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九. 累贅(redundancy)
言以簡潔為貴。寫句子沒有一個(gè)多余的詞;寫段落沒有一個(gè)無必要的句子。能用單詞的不用詞組;能用詞組的不用從句或句子。如：
in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同謂語從句，我們按照上述“能用詞組的不用從句”可以改為：in spite of his laziness, i like him.
例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析：整個(gè)句子可以大大簡化。
改為：
diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十. 不連貫(incoherence)
不連貫是指一個(gè)句子前言不對(duì)后語，或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不暢通。這也是考生常犯的毛病。
例1. the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析：the fresh water 與逗號(hào)后的it 不連貫。it 與things 在數(shù)方面不一致。
改為：
fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十一. 綜合性語言錯(cuò)誤(comprehensive misusage)
所謂“綜合性語言錯(cuò)誤”，是指除了上述十種錯(cuò)誤以外，還有諸如時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，大小寫等方面的錯(cuò)誤。
例1.today, money to everybody is very importance, our’s eat, cloth, live, go etc.
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