拖住雅思寫作速度的三大原因

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拖住雅思寫作速度的三大原因

在雅思寫作過程中， 有些學(xué)生作文存在著數(shù)量與質(zhì)量的矛盾。那么，何謂數(shù)量?何謂質(zhì)量呢?數(shù)量指的是在task 2規(guī)定的40分鐘時間寫不滿250個詞。質(zhì)量指的是，考生作文根本就沒有達(dá)到寫作評分的四項標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。因此就出現(xiàn)了兩種情況：第一種，字?jǐn)?shù)寫滿了，可是通篇邏輯混亂或者句式錯誤百出，詞不達(dá)意;第二種，文章邏輯基本過關(guān)，基本語法錯誤也不多，可是文章沒達(dá)到基本的字?jǐn)?shù)要求。針對此問題， 本文將從以下三個方面來主要分析造成雅思寫作速度慢這種問題的主要原因并相應(yīng)地給考生提出一些解決的建議。

首先：審題耗時較多?？忌鷮忣}出現(xiàn)偏差，無法準(zhǔn)確地把握住出題者意圖，從而在構(gòu)思過程中思維很“糾結(jié)”，因此拖緩了寫作速度。事實上，在審題過程中，一定要找到這個題目的關(guān)鍵詞，再進一步找到關(guān)鍵詞中的題眼，這樣才能把握住文章討論的重點和中心，從而不至于偏離主題。這樣也會減少一些不必要的“糾結(jié)”，從而加快了寫作速度，更重要的是同時也提高了寫作質(zhì)量。

比如：

Young children should stay in kindergartens or nursery schools so that their mothers can return to work earlier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

在這個題目審題過程中，我們應(yīng)該把握住以下關(guān)鍵詞：young children; kindergartens (nursery schools); mothers; work. 在這些關(guān)鍵詞中，題眼是kindergartens (nursery schools)。所以，題目是要考生討論，幼兒園的作用到底能不能減輕母親撫育孩子的負(fù)擔(dān)，從而使她們能盡早地踏入工作崗位。我們再具體縮減一點，其實中心就是要討論幼兒園的功能。如果這樣做的話，那么文章的中心意思就明確多了。可有的學(xué)生卻又討論起了為什么年輕的媽媽們要出去工作，諸如重新融入社會的需要等等，因此，這樣思考的考生在寫作過程中顯得猶豫不決甚至不知所措，當(dāng)然最后會影響寫作速度，更重要的是違背了出題者意圖，從而導(dǎo)致更大的失分。所以，切記，糾結(jié)地寫作看似想法多，角度多，實則是因為題目重點把握失誤形成的假像，要想提高寫作速度及質(zhì)量必須要仔細(xì)研讀題目，找出中心，從而有效地進行下一步的論證。

其次，論據(jù)積累不夠，即題目所涉及到的話題相關(guān)的背景信息積累較少，從而碰到題目無話可說。雖然雅思寫作不會涉及到太專業(yè)的題材(即使社會題材中涉及的面較廣，但是都是考生有話可說得題材)， 可是即使這樣，有的考生平時卻不太關(guān)注生活，碰到一些周遭常見的社會現(xiàn)象又沒有思考的習(xí)慣，并且同時又不積極地去通過范文有心地進行積累。那么，考生看到這些題材時有很強烈的陌生感，而這種陌生感會使考生即使攪盡腦汁卻如母雞下蛋般擠出一個個單詞，當(dāng)然會極大地影響寫作速度。舉個例子，比如2012年2月4日的寫作真題：

Some people think young people should follow the tradition of the society. Others think young people should be free to behave as individual. Discuss both view points and give you own opinion.

在這個題目中，如果考生對于tradition of the society(社會傳統(tǒng))所涉及到的方面及其特點一無所知，那么，即使使出渾身解數(shù)，也終會舉步維艱。

最后，句式基本功不扎實，從而使考生在句式表達(dá)的思索中浪費了大量時間?？忌貏e是目標(biāo)是6分基礎(chǔ)段和突破段考生本身語言句式功底就薄弱，所以，在這種情況下試想，讓一個基本句式都寫不正確的人在規(guī)定的時間內(nèi)寫出一篇邏輯緊密地文章顯然難度較大。特別是6分段的考生，在簡單句都不太確定是否正確的情況下卻要去用復(fù)合句等所謂的高級句式，肯定會漏洞百出。另外，中國式英語思維在延緩考生寫作速度方面“功不可沒”，特別是在英語句式表達(dá)過程中先將句式用中文想好了，然后才在大腦里機械地翻譯成英文，最后才用筆付諸于紙張，在這樣的情況下，可想而知，句式表達(dá)錯誤肯定是相當(dāng)多并且句式肯定是極其的不地道，因此，要想在規(guī)定之類寫完作文簡直天方夜譚，就算是在規(guī)定時間內(nèi)恰好寫完了，那么文章也將會是慘不忍睹。

綜上所述，雅思考生想要提高雅思的寫作速度，至少應(yīng)該做到以下三點：

看到題目時候，馬上確定關(guān)鍵詞，然后確定題眼即出題者意圖。

平時多積累論據(jù)，包括平時自己對于身邊的社會問題多積極地加以思考以及間接地進行積累論據(jù)。

平時多積累一些基本句式常用的地道表達(dá)并多做句式翻譯練習(xí)。

雅思小作文范例：餐廳服務(wù)表揚信

Dear Manager：

I am a reporter from the News Weekend. Because of the demand of my work， I often come to Beijing to do interviews. Your hotel is my favorite， because of the comfortable living conditions， and the considerate service， especially your excellent food.The restaurants in your hotel have many kinds of delicious food such as Chinese food， Japanese food， French food and so on. Among these delicious foods， I like the Beijing Toast Duck best， not only because of its Chinese characteristics but also its special taste for people from all over the world. So every time I come here I always choose this course.Furthermore， what impressed me most is the high quality service， it always makes me feel at home. Waiters and waitresses are so kind and warmhearted that they always earnestly recommend every new or special food of the restaurant. I will recommend your hotel and restaurant to my friends without any reservation and hesitation.

Hope your hotel and restaurant will be more prosperous in the future. Faithfully yours，

Will Smith

雅思大作文范例：大量空運水果蔬菜的利弊

題目：Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where those plants can’t grow or out of season. Some say it is a good thing, but others consider this use of air transport can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文：Air transport is commonly used to move fruits and vegetables to places where those farm products can’t grow or are out of season. The benefits of such business are obvious, but air transport also creates a number of problems.

Transport of fruits and vegetables by air enables consumers to enjoy a wider variety of fresh and in-season farm products from all over the world. Not only is air transport good for consumers, it is also a blessing for farmers because the market is no longer restricted by regions. As a result, air transport increases the sale volume by selling more products in more places.

Moreover, air transport of food has now become a major resource of incomes for air companies. In the past, air companies’ business mainly came from serving passengers. However, facing an increasingly tough market, air companies need to expand their share of market to serve a wider range of customers in order to stay in the game and make a profit. With a booming economy and more money to spend, people create a great potential for food transport business and good margin for air companies.

In spite of such benefits, air transport is not free of problems. One major issue is high cost. Air transport is probably the most expensive way of transport. Higher costs entail high prices, which in turn deprive people with less money the opportunities to enjoy such privileges. So air transported food is now for the rich, a fact that is unfair for poor people.

In addition, it is not the best option to solve problems by transporting food from outside for places where certain kinds of fruits does not grow. The most optimal way, it seems to me, is that we should change the environment required by such plants using scientific and biological methods such as creating suitable soil and temperature. Such solutions will be proven to be ultimately cost-effective and fundamental.

More importantly, research indicates that air transport pollutes the environment. For example, Britain transports half its food by air. However one kilo New Zealand fruit emits five kilo warm house gas on its way to destination. Therefore, some environmental groups and books advocate people to distinguish local fruit and air-transported fruit in an effort to cut the pollution from food consumption.

In conclusion, air transport has many benefits for consumers and farmers, but it also has problems such as high cost and pollution. More effective and environmental friendly solution should be found to address such problems.

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