實(shí)例評(píng)點(diǎn)雅思寫作10大爆款級(jí)“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭
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實(shí)例評(píng)點(diǎn)雅思寫作10大爆款級(jí)“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之一：磨磨唧唧 羅哩羅嗦
典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山 直奔主題
In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。
Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之二：中式英文人見(jiàn)人暈
典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之三：觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧
典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之四：偏離主題無(wú)軌電車
典型失敗案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之五：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤慘不忍睹
典型失敗案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之六：過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單沒(méi)有重點(diǎn)
典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之七：用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)
典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之八：意思重復(fù)原地踏步
典型失敗案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之九：中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)胡亂翻譯
典型失敗案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正確說(shuō)法：Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……
Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.
“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之十： 觀點(diǎn)武斷 態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬
典型失敗案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.
雅思寫作精講--教育類話題寫作語(yǔ)料頭腦風(fēng)暴
雅思寫作教育話題主要考察教育對(duì)個(gè)人的影響以及對(duì)國(guó)家社會(huì)的影響，但因前者居多，在寫作過(guò)程中我們需以學(xué)生作為重點(diǎn)分析對(duì)象，當(dāng)考察某種教育活動(dòng)或者教學(xué)方法時(shí)，往往要關(guān)注四項(xiàng)發(fā)展和三大影響源。
雅思寫作教育話題--四項(xiàng)發(fā)展：
身體(physical development)
智力(intellectual development)
道德及思想(mental development)
社會(huì)性發(fā)展(social development)
而它們主要來(lái)自三個(gè)影響源，即家庭、學(xué)校、社會(huì)(媒體)。
四大發(fā)展
身體健康：孩子們戶外活動(dòng)相對(duì)較少(insufficient outdoor activities)，并且花很多時(shí)間在電腦、電視、游戲等，因此會(huì)傷害視力(impair eyesight)，導(dǎo)致身體素質(zhì)下降(lead to poor fitness)，甚至引起超重(overweight)。學(xué)習(xí)壓力也會(huì)影響身體健康(often spend much time on study/face fiercecompetition so that they suffer from great study pressure).
智力發(fā)展：在校學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)術(shù)知識(shí)(academic knowledge)，從電視或其他途徑中了解課外知識(shí)(extra-curriculum knowledge that students are interested in)，學(xué)生們可以擴(kuò)寬視野(expand vision)和豐富知識(shí)(enrich knowledge)。不同科目會(huì)訓(xùn)練不同技能，例如數(shù)學(xué)-train logic thinking，藝術(shù)-relaxfrom pressure， discover talents and develop potential，體育-build better physical condition，learn team spirit， 語(yǔ)言-learn more cultures， more competitive when looking for a job， easierto adapt to the globalized world.
道德及思想發(fā)展：遵守規(guī)則(obey school rules， learn basic code of conduct)，判斷是非(judgeright and wrong)，尊重并體諒他人(respect others and be considerate). 培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立性和克服困難(develop independence and overcome difficulties on their own). 但學(xué)生易受外界不良影響(bevulnerable to the negative influence in TV or on the Internet)，易模仿行為(tend to imitateparents' and teachers'behavior)，缺乏自控(lack self-control ability)
社會(huì)性發(fā)展：校園活動(dòng)(campus activities)和社區(qū)服務(wù)(community service)可以幫助積累實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)(accumulate practical experience to better adapt to society)， 培養(yǎng)溝通技能(communicationskill/interpersonal skills)，解決問(wèn)題的能力(the ability to solve problems)，實(shí)習(xí)或兼職工作幫助了解工作環(huán)境(attend internships or take part-time job to better understand real workingenvironment)，認(rèn)識(shí)朋友(make more friends， gain more personal resources)
雅思寫作教育話題--三大影響源
家庭方面：父母對(duì)孩子的性格養(yǎng)成起關(guān)鍵作用(play a key role in building the character);提供更豐富的經(jīng)歷(博物館或旅游);更注重綜合發(fā)展(overall development)。但很多孩子為獨(dú)生子女(only child)，家長(zhǎng)忙于工作(be busy with work)并且沒(méi)有正確的教育方法(right parenting)可能會(huì)溺愛(ài)(spoil)或傷害孩子自尊(damage children's self-esteem)
學(xué)校方面：主要教授知識(shí)，教師擁有專業(yè)的背景(professional knowledge)和豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn)(richexperience)，傳授知識(shí)更有效(more effective in imparting knowledge)。對(duì)學(xué)生錯(cuò)誤行為及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)和處理(discover and deal with poor behaviors such as bully immediately)。校園活動(dòng)和體育鍛煉可以培養(yǎng)學(xué)生之間的合作競(jìng)爭(zhēng)(competition & cooperation)，促使增強(qiáng)實(shí)踐能力(improve practicalskills)，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生創(chuàng)新(encourage students to be creative)，激發(fā)好奇心和學(xué)習(xí)興趣(inspirecuriosity)
社會(huì)方面：以消極方面居多，主要指媒體中出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題內(nèi)容(questionable content)如暴力(violence)黃色(pornography)，青少年容易模仿(copy， imitate)，此外青少年不成熟(immature)未形成完整價(jià)值體系(value system)也容易被他人影響。
以上即為對(duì)雅思寫作教育類題目的思路匯總和語(yǔ)料，我們?nèi)裟馨盐者@四大發(fā)展和三大影響源便可更加自信地應(yīng)對(duì)不同的雅思寫作題目。