全面匯總雅思寫(xiě)作考生常犯4大錯(cuò)誤

　　雅思寫(xiě)作有小作文和大作文兩部分租場(chǎng)，兩部分的時(shí)間合計(jì)為60分鐘。由于大作文所占的分?jǐn)?shù)比重是小作文的兩倍，同時(shí)該部分A類與G類考題內(nèi)容以及問(wèn)題形式趨于一致，也是中國(guó)考生錯(cuò)誤比較密集的部分，所以接下來(lái)的內(nèi)容將圍繞著大作文部分展開(kāi)。下面我們就來(lái)看看在大作文中，考生常會(huì)犯的錯(cuò)。

　　全面匯總雅思寫(xiě)作考生常犯4大錯(cuò)誤

　　雅思寫(xiě)作考生常犯錯(cuò)誤

　　一、語(yǔ)言絕對(duì)化

　　根據(jù)能量守恒定律(Law of energy conservation)，即“各種能量形式互相轉(zhuǎn)換是有方向和條件限制的，能量相互轉(zhuǎn)換時(shí)其量值不變，表明能量不能被創(chuàng)造或消滅”，人們?cè)谑褂谜Z(yǔ)言描述事物變化時(shí)，應(yīng)盡可能避免語(yǔ)言過(guò)于絕對(duì)化，尤其是在使用第二語(yǔ)言進(jìn)行正式的書(shū)面表述時(shí)，更應(yīng)該注意該語(yǔ)言中非絕對(duì)化表達(dá)方式的學(xué)習(xí)，這樣才能盡顯文章內(nèi)容的客觀性。

　　二、只回答部分問(wèn)題

　　An increasing number of people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this case? Is it a positive or negative trend? (2010年1月23日 G類) 該題有兩個(gè)問(wèn)題，很多考生在作答時(shí)忽視了第一問(wèn)，只回答第二問(wèn)，抑或是把第一問(wèn)和該現(xiàn)象積極的一面混為一談，如：

　　On the one hand, living in big cities brings about a considerable number of advantages, which is also why people move to big cities. Initially, it is undeniable that work conditions in big cities are usually better that those in countries and small cities. With more work opportunities and a higher level of salary, people in other places, especially the young, are inclined to move to big cities. Subsequently, not only does living in big cities offer people better work conditions, but also it affords dwellers with facilities of higher quality. These facilities, such as the premium hospitals and education resources, are extremely attractive to countryside people and those in small cities. (考生答卷)

　　三、跑題、偏題嚴(yán)重

　　如Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A類)

　　就該題而言，很多考生將意思是“收費(fèi)”的charged一詞理解為“控制”，而該詞是我們?cè)谥袑W(xué)階段就已經(jīng)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)的。這就很容易導(dǎo)致作文跑題，而跑題的作文分?jǐn)?shù)為5分。

　　四、文章沒(méi)有分段

　　產(chǎn)生該問(wèn)題的原因主要有：1. 觀點(diǎn)數(shù)量少;2. 不知道觀點(diǎn)如何展開(kāi);3. 寫(xiě)作速度太慢。那么，要在規(guī)定時(shí)間內(nèi)滿足字?jǐn)?shù)要求，考生需要想出足夠多的觀點(diǎn)，學(xué)習(xí)如何展開(kāi)觀點(diǎn)，熟練運(yùn)用復(fù)雜句并提高寫(xiě)作速度。接下來(lái)我們將分析如何滿足以上要求：

　　以上就是小編總結(jié)的雅思寫(xiě)作考生常犯錯(cuò)誤，大家看后看看自己還有哪些方面不足，并及時(shí)改正。

　　妙用定語(yǔ)從句幫雅思寫(xiě)作加分

　　怎樣寫(xiě)出優(yōu)美句子——which的巧用(如何延長(zhǎng)句子，無(wú)限續(xù)命，寫(xiě)出優(yōu)美的長(zhǎng)難句)

　　翻譯練習(xí)：平等的教育能幫助解決學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好

　　l Equal access to education can help tackle educational underachievement

　　l Equal access to education which can help tackle educational underachievement should be carried out(聯(lián)想到被誰(shuí))

　　l Equal access to education which can help tackle educational underachievement should be carried out by local authorities(聯(lián)想到可否為主語(yǔ))

　　l Local authorities should ensure equal access to education, which can help tackle educational underachievement, a problem found among disadvantaged children. (最后再做補(bǔ)充)

　　which的巧用:還可以和不同的介詞搭配，呈現(xiàn)更靈活豐富的表達(dá)

　　翻譯練習(xí)：政府的職能包括擴(kuò)大基礎(chǔ)建設(shè)和創(chuàng)造更多就業(yè)以便于人們能夠更幸福的生活

　　l The government function includes expanding the infrastructure and creating more job opportunities, with which people will be able to live a joyful life

　　l An optimized education system is destined to generate numerous ambitious minors, among which, the elites of our time will also be found

　　一個(gè)優(yōu)化的教育體制注定會(huì)輸出無(wú)數(shù)的有志青年，而在他們當(dāng)中就蘊(yùn)藏著我們這個(gè)時(shí)代的精英

　　美文中的賓語(yǔ)從句妙用

　　When the Indonesian Tsunami occurred, nobody was psychologically prepared for the upcoming disaster which eventually wiped out the entire shore and even the whole city.

　　例子的描述短小精悍，采用WHICH引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，配合小詞wipe out的使用，讓整個(gè)例子變得很形象生動(dòng)

　　Although it’s unfair to lower the qualification for them, some counter-measures should be taken for the sake of a better pre-college learning which could enable them to compete with the urban students in the same platform.

　　讓步語(yǔ)氣+賓語(yǔ)從句的搭配，注意which指代的是better pre-college learning

　　The feeling and experience you acquired from the real places is visual and genuine, which will definitely give you a precious memory.

　　一句簡(jiǎn)單的賓語(yǔ)從句，但是從語(yǔ)義和邏輯上都很精煉

　　There is no denying that the creative artists could work as a lubrication when the social disputes and frictions occurred by entertaining people in an artistic and innovative manner, which, to some extent, will also start a new fashion trend or deliver breakthroughs to the realm of art.

　　經(jīng)久不衰的“逗號(hào)戰(zhàn)術(shù)”+好朋友“賓語(yǔ)從句”，無(wú)限續(xù)命