雅思作文語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤10大失分點(diǎn)整理

雅思作文語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤10大失分點(diǎn)整理

　　中國(guó)大部分考生在寫雅思議論文時(shí)失分實(shí)在可惜，因此，小編總結(jié)和歸納了目前考生在寫議論中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的十大失分點(diǎn)，下面是小編為您收集整理的雅思作文語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤10大失分點(diǎn)整理，供大家參考!

　　雅思作文語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤10大失分點(diǎn)整理

　　語(yǔ)法不一致

　　所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，還包括了數(shù)的不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致以及代詞不一致等。

　　比如：When one have money, he can do what he want to.

　　分析：one是第三人稱單數(shù)，因此本句的have應(yīng)改為has; want應(yīng)改為wants, 本句是典型的主謂不一致。

　　改為：When one has money, he can do what he wants (to do).

　　措詞毛病

　　學(xué)生在寫作中沒有養(yǎng)成良好的推敲，斟酌句子中所選用詞的習(xí)慣。大部分考生隨心所欲，拿來(lái)就用，所以作文中用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤隨處可見。

　　比如：The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.

　　分析：顯然，考生把obstacles“障礙”，“障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。另外“the increasing use(不斷增加的使用)”應(yīng)改為“abusive use(濫用)”。

　　改為：The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.

　　修飾語(yǔ)錯(cuò)位

　　英語(yǔ)與漢語(yǔ)不同，同一個(gè)修飾語(yǔ)置于句子不同的位置，句子的含義可能引起變化。對(duì)于這一點(diǎn)考生們往往沒有引起足夠的重視，因而造成了不必要的誤解。

　　比如：I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.

　　分析：better位置不當(dāng)，應(yīng)置于句末。

　　句子不完整

　　在口語(yǔ)中，交際雙方可借助手勢(shì)語(yǔ)氣上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解?？墒菚嬲Z(yǔ)就不同了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會(huì)令意思表達(dá)不清，這種情況常常在主句寫完以后，作者又想加些補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明時(shí)發(fā)生。

　　比如：There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.

　　分析：本句后半部分"For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一個(gè)完整的句子，僅為一些不連貫的詞語(yǔ)，不能獨(dú)立成句。

　　改為：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.

　　指代不清

　　指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清，或者先后所用的代詞不一致。

　　比如：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.

　　讀完上面這一句話，讀者無(wú)法明確地判斷兩位姑娘中誰(shuí)將結(jié)婚，誰(shuí)將當(dāng)伴娘。

　　如果我們把易于引起誤解的代詞所指代的對(duì)象加以明確，意思就一目了然了。這個(gè)句子可改為：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

　　懸垂修飾語(yǔ)

　　所謂懸垂修飾語(yǔ)是指句首的短語(yǔ)與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清。

　　比如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 這句中"at the age of ten"只寫出十歲時(shí)，但沒有說(shuō)明“誰(shuí)”十歲時(shí)，按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我們把這個(gè)懸垂修飾語(yǔ)改得明確一點(diǎn)，讀者或考官在讀句子時(shí)就不會(huì)誤解了。

　　改為：When I was ten, my grandfather died.

　　詞性誤用

　　“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等。

　　比如：None can negative the importance of money.

　　分析：negative系形容詞，誤作動(dòng)詞。

　　改為：None can deny the importance of money.

　　不間斷句子

　　這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤的出現(xiàn)受中文意識(shí)的影響很大。很多考生在寫句子時(shí)，句子之間缺乏有效的連接成分。甚至，有的句子寫的比較中式化。

　　比如：There are many ways we get to know the outside world.

　　分析：這個(gè)句子包含了兩層完整的意思：“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outside world”。簡(jiǎn)單地把它們連在一起就不妥當(dāng)了

　　改為：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.

　　累贅

　　寫句子沒有一個(gè)多余的詞;寫段落沒有一個(gè)無(wú)必要的句子。能用單詞的不用詞組;能用詞組的不用從句或句子。

　　比如：In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同謂語(yǔ)從句。

　　我們按照上述“能用詞組的不用從句”可以改為：In spite of his laziness, I like him.

　　比如：For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.

　　改為：Diligent people use money only to buy what they need.

　　句子不連貫

　　不連貫是指一個(gè)句子前言不對(duì)后語(yǔ)，或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不暢通，這也是考生常犯的毛病。

　　比如：The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.

　　分析：the fresh water與逗號(hào)后的it不連貫，it與things在數(shù)方面不一致。

　　如何看待私家車的普及

　　Advantages and disadvantages of private cars.

　　With the fantastic spur both in industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.

　　Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars. First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries. Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. Finally, life will become more convenient. A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun.

　　However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars. They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

　　In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore I am against developing private cars.

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：一分為二陳述事實(shí)，觀點(diǎn)清晰，層次分明

　　但是，最后結(jié)尾概括自己的觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，有馬失前蹄的嫌疑，收尾不如中間精彩，特別是很牽強(qiáng)的湊句子：交通事故越來(lái)越多，跟私家車越來(lái)越多沒有必然聯(lián)系，小編覺得這就有點(diǎn)消極被動(dòng)了，大部分事故是人為的，而非車多造成的，就像中國(guó)人口多，所以死亡率怎么算也比其他國(guó)家高一樣，收尾是閱卷老師看的重點(diǎn)，希望鴨子們還是避免虎頭蛇尾式的收尾。