4種典型的雅思寫(xiě)作錯(cuò)誤 千萬(wàn)要避免

4種典型的雅思寫(xiě)作錯(cuò)誤 千萬(wàn)要避免

　　寫(xiě)作是我們內(nèi)地考生比較擅長(zhǎng)的一個(gè)部分，對(duì)于其他雅思考試部分來(lái)說(shuō)。但是這并不代表很多考生就能取得高分，有很多考生還是會(huì)犯下一些錯(cuò)誤，比如觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)不清，結(jié)構(gòu)沒(méi)有邏輯性。下面是小編為您收集整理的4種典型的雅思寫(xiě)作錯(cuò)誤千萬(wàn)要避免，供大家參考!

　　4種典型的雅思寫(xiě)作錯(cuò)誤 千萬(wàn)要避免

　　Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

　　觀點(diǎn)一： it might cost a lot when moving large companies and factories, since it will prove difficult to operate business in remote areas.

　　錯(cuò)誤：是否容易做生意，帶來(lái)經(jīng)濟(jì)效益并不能夠解釋是否應(yīng)該將公司或者工廠移到市郊去。因?yàn)槲恼轮辉诤跏欠衲軌蚪鉀Q住房和交通問(wèn)題，至于其中的經(jīng)濟(jì)得失不在文章討論之列。

　　觀點(diǎn)二：it is nearly impossible to move large companies and factories at once, for most of companies are large in size.

　　錯(cuò)誤：能不能夠?qū)⒐S和公司移到市郊也不在文章討論范圍。題目很明顯已經(jīng)作出一個(gè)假設(shè)，就是把公司和工廠搬到市郊是完全有可能的，目前所關(guān)注的是這個(gè)做法是否可以解決住房和交通問(wèn)題。

　　觀點(diǎn)三： sceneries are gorgeous at the countryside, and newcoming factories will injure the local environment.

　　是否影響當(dāng)?shù)丨h(huán)境造成污染并不重要。解決交通問(wèn)題和解決污染問(wèn)題沒(méi)有任何關(guān)系，即便交通會(huì)產(chǎn)生污染問(wèn)題!

　　Do you think old buildings should be broken down, and give place for modern buildings. How are the old buildings important in our society?

　　觀點(diǎn)一： some old buildings attract multimillion tourists every year (such as the Great Wall), so to demolish it will mean a loss to the city where it is located.

　　本觀點(diǎn)從旅游觀光或者考古的角度說(shuō)古老建筑并沒(méi)有錯(cuò)，可是錯(cuò)在沒(méi)有理解Building的含義，Building 不同于construction, 長(zhǎng)城才算 construction。這道題和很多常見(jiàn)的雅思題不一樣，就是考到了某種名詞的確切意思，考生日后到了國(guó)外的大學(xué)會(huì)寫(xiě)很多essay, 而寫(xiě)一篇好的essay往往第一段就要解釋或者界定文章題目的某個(gè)核心名詞。我第一次看到上述的題目時(shí)，我的反應(yīng)就是商業(yè)用樓，住宅用樓，工業(yè)用樓，而不是長(zhǎng)城，金字塔，埃菲爾鐵塔，因?yàn)锽uilding的意思是a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place(摘自WORLD字典);有的考生或許會(huì)覺(jué)得在考場(chǎng)上沒(méi)有字典去翻查一個(gè)名詞，是不是很不公平，因?yàn)橐黄獓?yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)奈恼滦枰Y料去論證。然而，大家忽視了Building是一個(gè)非常簡(jiǎn)單的單詞，它的詞義已經(jīng)到了常識(shí)的地步，如果這樣的單詞不認(rèn)識(shí)，而產(chǎn)生審題的偏差，考不到理想分?jǐn)?shù)也是當(dāng)然。

　　觀點(diǎn)二：old buildings are valuable assets for those archeologists to study the human activities before the War, since some records had turned ruins .

　　本來(lái)古老建筑可以用于考古價(jià)值無(wú)可厚非，但是是否只適合分析戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)之前的人類行為就值得商榷。這句話最大的問(wèn)題就是把古老建筑看作是考古學(xué)家唯一可以利用的物體去分析戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)之前的人類行為。改正的方法很簡(jiǎn)單，把before the War去掉。

　　雅思寫(xiě)作詞匯--常見(jiàn)替換詞整理

　　1.重要的：important, key, crucial, critical, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable, imperative

　　2. 解決：solve, deal with, cope with, handle, resolve, address, tackle

　　3. 損害：damage, hurt, injure, harm, impair, undermine, jeopardize

　　4. 給予：give, offer, render, impart, provide, supply, afford

　　5. 優(yōu)勢(shì)：advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength

　　6. 缺陷：disadvantage, demerit, drawback, downside, weakness

　　7. 使迷惑：puzzle, bewilder, perplex, baffle

　　8. 培養(yǎng)：develop, cultivate, foster

　　9. 認(rèn)為：think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue, be convinced, be firmly convinced, be fully convinced

　　10. 保護(hù)：protect, conserve, preserve

　　11. 確保：assure, ensure, guarantee, pledge

　　12. 有害的：bad, harmful, evil, detrimental, baneful

　　13. 要求：request, demand, needs, requisition

　　14. 消除：eliminate, clear, remove, clear up, take away, smooth away

　　15. 導(dǎo)致：lead to, bring about, result in, cause, spark off, conduce to, procure, induce, generate

　　16. 因此：so, therefore, thus, hence, consequently, as a consequence, accordingly, as a result, because of this, as a result of this

　　17. 增長(zhǎng)至：grow to, rise to, increase to, go up to, climb to, ascend to, jump to, shoot to

　　18. 降低至：dip to, fall to, decline to, decrease to, drop to, go down to, reduce to, slump to, descend to, sink to, slide to

　　19. 保持穩(wěn)定：level out, remain stable, remain still, remain steady, maintain the same level, remain unchanged, stay constant, level off, keep its stability

　　20. 急劇地：dramatically, drastically, sharply, hugely, enormously, steeply, substantially, considerably, significantly, markedly, surprisingly, strikingly, radically, remarkably, vastly, noticeably

　　21. 宣稱：allege, assert, declare, claim

　　22. 發(fā)生：happen, occur, take place

　　23. 原因：reason, factor, cause

　　24. 發(fā)展：development, advance, progress

　　25. 有益的：useful, helpful, beneficial, profitable, rewarding, advantageous,

　　26. 影響：influence, impact, effect

　　27. 明顯的：clear, obvious, evident, self-evident, manifest, apparent, crystal-clear

　　28. 占：comprise, take up, account for, constitute, consist of, make up, occupy, hold, compose

　　29. 對(duì)比而言：by contrast, on the other hand, on the contrary, conversely,

　　30. 展示：show, reveal, illustrate, demonstrate, depict, present, represent, describe

　　31. 大約：approximately, almost, about, around, nearly, roughly

　　32. 事實(shí)上：practically, in practice, essentially, in essence, in reality, in effect, in fact, as a matter of fact

　　33. 換言之：namely, that is to say, in other words, to put it like this, to put it differently, to put it from another angle