高中英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)題的專(zhuān)題和答案(2)
高中英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)題的專(zhuān)題的答案
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Dear Peter，
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you?ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 2
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Dear Bob，
How is everything going? I’m writing to express my regret at being unable to go to the bookstore with you next weekend，which I have promised.I feel terribly sorry about it and want you to know what happened.
What makes me concerned is my final exam which will be held two weeks later, so I have to make a preparation for it at that time.I hope you could appreciate that I must spare no effort to do well in my final exam if possible.Could we make another appointment to go to the bookstore together?
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Please let me know what time is OK for you.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 3
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Dear__Jim，
Its great to hear from you.I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.He，in his book，Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World)，introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.That opened our eyes to the world.In fact，he inspires me to major in English in college，to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books!Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours，
Li__Hua
Writing
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The Season I Like Best
If someone asks me which season I like best，I can tell him without hesitation that spring is my favorite of the four seasons.
Two reasons may account for why I like spring best.In spring，the weather gets warmer and the days get longer.Everything begins to grow.Many kinds of flowers start to come out，which give the earth a pretty coat，making this world a better place to live in.Besides，I like to go camping in spring and I feel so refreshed in the surrounding of nature.I will forget all my bad moods when walking in nature.
Spring is my favorite season.
Writing 5
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Planning Is Good，But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However，a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event，I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that，I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic，wrote a speech，and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
Writing 6
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I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have our article before June 28?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 7
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I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon.
If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking__forward__to__your__reply.
Yours，
Li__Hua
Writing 8
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
這是一篇話題類(lèi)作文。要求根據(jù)引語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出對(duì)成功的理解。需要寫(xiě)的話題已經(jīng)給出需要我們120詞左右不要太多也不要太少。
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This__quotation__from__Winston__Churchill__tells__us__that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather
At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.
Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick to it.
Writing 9
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
主題：“十年后的我”;
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：家庭、工作、業(yè)余生活三方面。
段落層次：適當(dāng)插入連接詞使文章層次分
4.亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：適當(dāng)使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)避免句式單一;恰當(dāng)使用高級(jí)詞匯避免盡用“兒科詞匯”以增加文章亮點(diǎn)提高文章檔次。
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n__the__future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own familyong well with my colleagues.I'll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time，I'll continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games.On my holidays，I'll travel around the world.In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.
Writing 10
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nsive or not.What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.
Years ago，I received a gift from a friend on my birthday，who is now living far away.It delighted me at the sight of it.It was a piece of paper cutting，a Chinese traditional art.With the gift，he included a letter，in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting himself.It took him several weeks to learn to make it.That's why I value it more than any other gift I received that day.
Now，it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom.Whenever I look at it，I couldn't help thinking of my friend.However far away we are，we feel close to each other.So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.
考點(diǎn)二 圖畫(huà)、圖表類(lèi)
Writing 1
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A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes，pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles，and turned those into dolls，handbags，tissue boxes and small vases.That weekend，we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts，especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
Writing 2
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本文是一篇圖畫(huà)作文用圖畫(huà)的形式展示了一個(gè)活動(dòng)過(guò)程。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審讀四幅圖畫(huà)理清其內(nèi)在的邏輯關(guān)系交代清楚活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物和活動(dòng)的具體內(nèi)容;同時(shí)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞把四幅圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容連成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體。
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When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.
We hope we can have more activities of this kind!
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文注意使用了過(guò)渡詞匯first等來(lái)銜接句子和段落使文章更有條理行文連貫。
時(shí)態(tài)把握準(zhǔn)確主要運(yùn)用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)文章上下文時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。
恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 Looking at the figurines, ;定語(yǔ)從句we put the figurines we made on the table...;時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句When the craftsman came into the classroom, 等讓文章靚麗起來(lái)。
Writing
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本文是一篇漫畫(huà)類(lèi)作文要求根據(jù)圖畫(huà)展示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的短文。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.描述圖畫(huà)(一般現(xiàn)在時(shí))
概述其含義(取自中國(guó)古代成語(yǔ)“鑿壁偷光”概述其內(nèi)容并滲透“刻苦求學(xué)”的思想)
談個(gè)人感想(根據(jù)這個(gè)成語(yǔ)想到自身如何去做)
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sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.
This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boyd even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.
se，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文簡(jiǎn)明扼要要點(diǎn)齊全信息豐富條理清晰。靈活運(yùn)用了高級(jí)詞匯如：shabby, 等體現(xiàn)出作者豐富的詞匯積累能力。句型上運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型豐富了句式結(jié)構(gòu);最后一句起到了畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用是一篇上等佳作。
Writing
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
書(shū)面表達(dá)部分屬于給材料作文的類(lèi)型提供了文字和圖表相結(jié)合的三份材料要求考生在概要敘述材料的基礎(chǔ)上分析導(dǎo)致交通問(wèn)題的主要原因并從社會(huì)規(guī)范和個(gè)人行為兩方面討論自己得到的啟示。
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l examples.
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, s, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.
In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
文章要點(diǎn)全語(yǔ)法知識(shí)應(yīng)用靈活且使用得當(dāng)堪稱(chēng)佳作。文中開(kāi)頭就使用not only...but also 句式使行文非常連貫。高級(jí)詞匯in spite of, 等強(qiáng)調(diào)句式虛擬語(yǔ)氣的應(yīng)用等都彰顯了作者的扎實(shí)的英語(yǔ)功底。
考點(diǎn)三 應(yīng)用類(lèi)
Writing 1
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Dear Mr.Jenkins，
My name is Li Hua, and Im one of your students in the International Economy and Commercial Department.I’m writing to ask you for some help.
In order to earn some extra money and reduce my family’s burden, I’d like to go to a foreign trading company to find a part-time job in the coming summer vacation.Ive finished the application and personal resume.But I’m not sure if they are written well enough to catch their eye.Please refer to the attachments which include the application and resume.
I’d appreciate it if you could help me revise them.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Writing
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本文是一篇典型的邀請(qǐng)信重點(diǎn)是李華邀請(qǐng)美國(guó)朋友Jim參加龍舟訓(xùn)練營(yíng)要按照邀請(qǐng)信的格式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作即發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)介紹活動(dòng)的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)內(nèi)容參加原因等最后說(shuō)明自己的期待和感謝。
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I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you'd like to go with me.
This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I'll send you more information.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.
Yours，
Li Hua
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊層次分明運(yùn)用了邀請(qǐng)信的一些常用語(yǔ)如I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I wonder if you'd like to go with me.文中的時(shí)態(tài)把握較好使用了一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)等不同的時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述不同的事情。
Writing
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考查應(yīng)用類(lèi)作文。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要注意以下幾個(gè)方面：首先需要審題。即：審要求、審文體、審人稱(chēng)、審時(shí)態(tài)。其次考生要能夠抓中心列要點(diǎn)列出寫(xiě)作提綱。寫(xiě)作文時(shí)一定要切題抓住中心緊扣要點(diǎn).然后在體裁明確、中心突出、要點(diǎn)清晰的前提下考生應(yīng)該選擇自1、 2;第二段寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)3;第三段寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)4, 以及希望得到對(duì)方的回信。
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This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am quite interested in it.I think I'm fit for it.As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years.In addition，I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.So I'm quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday.As the saying goes, practice makes perfect.Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese，see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes.Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward.It is just what I want.I'm eager to improve my English.So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Hope for your early reply!
Yours，
Li Xia
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文要點(diǎn)齊全結(jié)構(gòu)完整。使用多種句式如定語(yǔ)從句：I am Chinese, ;表語(yǔ)從句：It is just what I want.等。還使用了大量短語(yǔ)等。
Writing
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I'm Li Jin, Chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang Middle School.Now I have a piece of good news to tell you.
Our school will donate 5，000 copies of different valuable books to your class, which include popular science books, classic works and so on.Popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way and they can help you understand science subjects better and arouse your curiosity about scientific discoveries.Classic works present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.They not only offer you joy and excitement, but also encourage you to think critically.
We will take these books to your school to take part in the summer camp in July this year.
If you have more needs, please let me know as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely
Li Jin
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文要點(diǎn)齊全較好地完成了規(guī)定的任務(wù)同時(shí)也應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯包括不定式to tell you作后置定語(yǔ)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which include...連接詞and的靈活運(yùn)用連接并列謂語(yǔ)引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句等?？傊慕Y(jié)構(gòu)緊湊句際間連接順暢是一篇難得的佳作。
Writing
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本文是一篇應(yīng)用文要求根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)征郵件。文章要求明確思路清晰是學(xué)生熟悉的話題。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.表達(dá)寫(xiě)信意圖(申請(qǐng)“英語(yǔ)文化節(jié)”學(xué)生自愿者)
陳述應(yīng)征目的(如：提高英語(yǔ)能力交流能力等)
說(shuō)明應(yīng)征條件(性格能力等方面)
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I'm__Li__Hua，a__student__from__Class__2，Grade__3.I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering，my service，I will be able to improve my organisational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates.Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文要點(diǎn)齊全完全符合應(yīng)征郵件的要求層次分明脈絡(luò)清晰。開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地表達(dá)了寫(xiě)信的意圖并對(duì)自己應(yīng)征目的和應(yīng)征條件分別進(jìn)行了闡述同時(shí)在文章最后表達(dá)了自己的信心和愿望。文章中的by offering my service以及非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用都是文中的亮點(diǎn)所在organisational ability，communication skills，appreciate，live up to your expectations等高級(jí)詞匯運(yùn)用也體現(xiàn)了作者深厚的語(yǔ)言功底?？傊且黄豢啥嗟玫募炎鳌?/p>
Writing
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
考查屬于書(shū)信類(lèi)作文。首先需要審題。即：審要求、審文體、審人稱(chēng)、審時(shí)態(tài)。其次要列好提綱。一、表明寫(xiě)信目的：申請(qǐng)參加該活動(dòng)(添加得知消息);二、選擇一種分享方式：二者選
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organizing this activity to share books worldwide，I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.
You've introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release.Of the two，the latter wins my favor.By means of controlled release，I only need to deliver books to other participants，not only are books shared but also it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.
If you could provide more specific information，I would be well grateful.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文要點(diǎn)齊全結(jié)構(gòu)完整。使用多種短語(yǔ)和高級(jí)句式如not only...but also;build up;分詞作狀語(yǔ)：Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide;定語(yǔ)從句：I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading 等。
Writing
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內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
參加為期六周的英語(yǔ)班
詢問(wèn)：
(1)課程開(kāi)始時(shí)間、每周課時(shí)
(2)每班人數(shù)
(3)學(xué)費(fèi)、住宿
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I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad，and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First?Besidesuld not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
Writing 8
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I'm__Li__Jin，monitor__of__Class__One，Grade__Eleven.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student.You're welcome to stay with us.
Our school is located in a northern city of China，where you can taste many kinds of delicious food，because it is well famous for its snacks.Our city witnesses four different seasons，plenty of sunshine and good rainfall，but in winter you may feel a little cold.
Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls，who are warm and generous and ready to offer help.They are very friendly and easy to get along with.You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.
Yours，
Li__Jin
Writing 9
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本文是應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g迎詞。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
(1)歡迎
(2)活動(dòng)介紹(目的內(nèi)容等)
(3)祝愿
人稱(chēng)：代表學(xué)校歡迎國(guó)外代表團(tuán)故應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)I或者we。
時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)
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On behalf of our school，I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.
As scheduled，we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.The programme consists of the following activities：recitation
Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you.
考點(diǎn)四 開(kāi)放、半開(kāi)放類(lèi)
Writing 1
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On-line voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
In my opinion，on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports.In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient，regardless of time and space.Furthermore，voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.
To be honest，voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because they hate voting，but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.Therefore，I hold a positive attitude towards on-line voting.
Writing
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arn without questioning，in other words questioning is a bridge to learning or is the very beginning of learning.Take learning English for example，when we learn the meaning of the phrase “pick up”，our first reaction is what it means and how we can use it.Such a question keeps us going on learning.Then come the following questions: can we find a sentence where we can use it? Or can we find a dictionary to look it up? After the questions being put forward one by one，our actions go further and further，until we get a good command of it at last.So when you are beginning to learn something，don't be shy to ask questions，only with the questions can we have the inspiration to learn something new or do better than before.
Writing 3
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本文是一篇命題材料作文作文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出考生需要根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作必須涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)還要注意語(yǔ)篇的連貫性。注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和定語(yǔ)從句、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)等重點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。詞數(shù)在120左右標(biāo)題不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意行文的連貫性不能出現(xiàn)與本人有關(guān)的信息。
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A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
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范文使用了一些重點(diǎn)句型：定語(yǔ)從句I would原因狀語(yǔ)從句because he is not only the first Chinese...;賓語(yǔ)從句I could learn a great deal from him about it，②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained;條件狀語(yǔ)從句If I could interview him;非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which must be very interesting等顯示了扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)法功底也使作文的句式變得多樣化;范文還使用了一些固定搭配和固定短語(yǔ)：not only...but also...;one of the...;the first to do sth, ;a great deal;such...as等使作文的內(nèi)容得到了豐富;范文注意使用not only...but also, 和finally等來(lái)銜接句子使范文顯得語(yǔ)意連貫、銜接緊湊。
Writing
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本文是一篇開(kāi)放式寫(xiě)作屬于議論文的范疇。首先確定人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主表達(dá)1.首先明確自己的觀點(diǎn)：堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見(jiàn)二者只能取其一。2.以具體事例闡述你這么選擇的理由。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意用詞準(zhǔn)確句際間連貫性要強(qiáng)使上下文銜接渾然一體。
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When I Have a Different Opinion
d choose to stick to it.By doing so，I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.We did have a good time that day.Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
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本文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰要點(diǎn)全面層次清楚。寫(xiě)作中使用了較高級(jí)的詞語(yǔ)為文章增色不少同時(shí)準(zhǔn)確使用了復(fù)雜句子結(jié)構(gòu)包括非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞to deal with...等引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句引導(dǎo)的對(duì)比句引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句連接的并列結(jié)構(gòu)等。
Writing
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my teacher before my classmates.
When I was young, I was very shy. I didn't dare to speak in public. When the teacher asked me to answer a question, I was always too nervous to answer it, which made me very sad.
One day, the teacher asked me to come to his office, where he told me to recite a text. I recited it fluently. The teacher praised me and told me I would recite it the next day before my classmates. I told him that I was too nervous, but he insisted that I should do it. The next morning, I was asked to recite the text that I had prepared. Although I did poorly, the teacher praised me very much. I was so proud of myself that day.
After that, I was frequently praised before my classmates and began to gain confidence. I tried even harder and the teacher praised me more. Eventually，I overcame my shyness. It was the teacher's praise that made me become a better student.
Writing 6
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I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation.Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.Compared with the escaped driver，I am proud of what I did.
As a member of the society，I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
Writing 7
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Where there's a will,
I can't agree more with the view.In our daily life，we will face all kinds of challenges and difficulties.As long as we possess a strong will to get through such hurdles instead of running away from them，we will possess success and a brilliant future.
Take myself for example.I was born in a poor family，and my parents are both laid-off workers.I do cherish the educational opportunity my parents offer to me and I always adopt the motto—“Where there is a willstudy around the clock to prepare for the College Entrance Examination.Through my constant efforts，I believe I can change not only my own fate but also the worrying situation of my family.
Therefore，I firmly believe that our future depends on a strong will.
Writing 8
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;my phone fallsriends.Moreover，it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.
Personally，it is completely wrong of him to behave with such an attitude towards others and life.As a matter of fact，none of us can live alone in society.We all depend on others sometimes to some degree.If everyone does and thinks as he does，he'll not live any longer in the world.
I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need.Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble.Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.That is what the saying goes：“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.
Writing 1
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Dear Thomas，
Im so thankful to you for your kindness and help in the oral English training course. My spoken English has greatly improved owing to the effective training program，during which I made many new friends.
I used to be shy and untalkative. When staying with my classmates，I tried to communicate with them in English，but I often made mistakes. Whenever I met with native speakers，I had a strong willing to practise English，but I wasnt brave enough to open my mouth，which worried me for a long time. Luckily enough，your training course smoothed away all the difficulties. I have benefited from it.
Now，Im glad to learn you are to organize more training courses，and I hope I can get your advice on how to improve my writing. In short，Im looking forward to more new things in our future courses.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
Writing 2
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Dear__Sir，
I__am__Li__Hua.__I__am__writing__to complain about one of your bus-drivers improper and rude behaviors.
Last Sunday, I was taking a bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”
I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.
Yours__sincerely，
Li__Hua
Writing 3
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I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It’s never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.
First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 4
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Dear Dr Dan，
Im writing to ask for some information about your school and how to become admit to your university.
As a senior 3 girl, I have always been considering going abroad for further studies, which I suppose will benefit me greatly in the long term. I’m an outstanding student and good at physics and biology, including English of course and I hope to grasp this opportunity to realize my dream.
What puzzles me is that I don’t know the exact time for the test and interview, and also I am confused about what to be prepared for the test. Besides this, I will greatly appreciate it if you could introduce me something about the school life in your university, especially the after-school activities, spare-time life and the tuition.
Thank you so much and Im looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
Writing
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Everyone__has__a__person__he__wants__to__say__thank-you__to__in__his__deep__heart.I__owe__my__great__gratitude__to__my__mother.
My mother is a primary school teacher who graduated from a teachers college.She is a devoted mother as well as a kind and patient teacher.I was attended considerately by her every day，especially this year when I am in Senior Three.She often cooks delicious dishes for me and helps me clean up my room.Whats more，she even accompanies me deep into the night every time I am doing my homework.Most important of all，whenever I get upset or lose heart，she will comfort me and encourage me until I have cheered up.I appreciate her motto “Heaven will always leave a door open.As long as you work hard，you will definitely succeed.”
So now I spare no efforts in studying and focus all my attention on my lessons in order to be admitted into a famous university next year，so that I can reward my mother.
Writing 6
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Dear__students，
Last__weekend，our__class__went__on__an__interesting__camping__trip.All__the__way__we__enjoyed__the__beautiful__scenery__and__fresh__air.However，many of us didnt notice the bad effects on the environment due to our bad behavior.Some of us threw rubbish here and there，leaving words on famous buildings，picking flowers and speaking loudly in public，etc.
Firstly，what these students did is against the spirit of eco-travel.A true eco-travel is a journey which not only allows us to express our love for nature but also needs our responsibility.As we enjoy the beauty of nature we cant damage it.And all we should do is protect the environment and wildlife.
Only when we improve our awareness of eco-travel can our earth become more and more beautiful.After all，the earth is the only place for us to live on.
Best__wishes!
Yours，
Li__Hua
Writing 7
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As__a__tour__guide__of__an__international__travel__agency，I__find__it__so__embarrassing__to__see__many__Chinese__tourists__behave__badly__abroad.They speak loudly in public places，carve characters on tourist attractions，throw rubbish，spit everywhere，and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights.Such bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.
Measures should be taken to stop this.First，before going abroad，tourists should be trained to obey social and public order，and respect local religions and customs.Besides，it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days.Last，laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places.I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.
Writing 8
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Dear__John，
Im__very__glad__to__hear__that__you__will__come__to__my__city__for__short-term__language__training. In your letter，you mentioned the Tower Hotel.Here is some detailed information about it.
The Tower Hotel is located on Yuanda Road.Go through the gate of the entrance，and you will see the high building—Tower Hotel，in front of which lies a beautiful garden.Behind the building is a swimming pool，where you can go swimming for relaxing.Near the swimming pool stands a dining hall，where meals are served from 7：30 am to 9：00 am and between 5：30 pm and 8：00 pm.
As to accommodation fees，everyone should pay 200 yuan per day.If you need further information，please enquire at the reception desk on the ground floor when you arrive here.
Looking forward to seeing you very soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 9
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As the International Volunteer Day was coming, some volunteers of our school were organized to help the policemen with traffic control in our city. At 8 o’clock on the morning of last Sunday, we gathered at the school gate. One of our teachers was in charge of this activity and he divided us into four groups. Then we went to different crossings near our school. The police officers told us what we should do and how to protect ourselves from danger. We spent the whole morning keeping the streams of traffic flowing smoothly. With a red banner in our hands, we stopped some road users from running the red light. Some citizens praised us for our good deeds. Though we were very tired that morning, we were proud to have offered service to our society.
Writing 10
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Good__morning,__everyone!__It’s__my__honor__to__be__here__to__make__a__short__speech.
Recently I have found that some of our classmates can’t study effectively. Some can’t help falling asleep in class, because they often study too late into the night. Others seldom have sports, which surely does harm to their health.
As we know, enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students. We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep, so we should try to make wise use of our time，striking a balance between work and leisure. Besides, doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot, keeping fit, reducing stress and so on. Let’s spare some time to do all kinds of sports. And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
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