2019江蘇高考英語(yǔ)作文超精講
2019江蘇高考英語(yǔ)作文超精講
高考英語(yǔ)作文多增10分的勁爆預(yù)測(cè)!
【預(yù)測(cè)話(huà)題】
傳統(tǒng)文化
【預(yù)測(cè)題目】
假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣。他想請(qǐng)你介紹你最喜歡的一個(gè)節(jié)日，如中秋節(jié)、端午節(jié)、春節(jié)等，你通常是怎么慶祝的，以及你喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)日的原因。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的問(wèn)題回復(fù)郵件。
提示詞語(yǔ)：eat, get together, share, happy, special
【參考范文】
Hi! Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It usually comes in September or October. On that day, our family members usually get together and have a nice meal. After that, I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families.
I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes. They are in the shape of a full moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss. In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a day of pleasure and happiness.
I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals.
Yours,
Li Hua
2017年高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作極有可能采用應(yīng)用文進(jìn)行考查，比如留言條。
【預(yù)測(cè)作文】留言條
【預(yù)測(cè)題目】
假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華，星期天你要和你的同班同學(xué)李明一起去敬老院參加義務(wù)勞動(dòng)，你去找他，但他沒(méi)有在家，你給他留言說(shuō)明要求，內(nèi)容如下：
(1)9：30在學(xué)校門(mén)口集合;
(2)帶勞動(dòng)工具(洗衣粉、理發(fā)工具、除草工具等);
(3)自帶午飯，騎自行車(chē)前往。
注意：
(1)詞數(shù)100左右;
(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear Li Ming,
This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you.
We'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike. And don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we'll stay there for chatting with them at noon.
If you come back, please phone me at once.
Yours
Li Hua
共享單車(chē)無(wú)疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。語(yǔ)文高考作文話(huà)題都有：共享單車(chē)。
【預(yù)測(cè)話(huà)題】共享單車(chē)
【預(yù)測(cè)題目】
假定你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的美國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)新近出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車(chē)“mobike”很感興趣，并請(qǐng)你做個(gè)簡(jiǎn)要介紹。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 這種單車(chē)的使用方法(如：APP查看車(chē)輛、掃碼開(kāi)鎖等);
2. 這種單車(chē)的優(yōu)勢(shì);
3. 你對(duì)這種單車(chē)的看法。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;
2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞：智能手機(jī) smartphone, 二維碼 the QR code
【參考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike--mobike mentioned in your latest letter.
It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.
Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
節(jié)約是中華人民的傳統(tǒng)美德，然而，當(dāng)前國(guó)人的浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象卻十分嚴(yán)重，尤其是餐桌上的浪費(fèi)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120詞的短文，描述你的一次“餐桌浪費(fèi)”經(jīng)歷，并結(jié)合當(dāng)前的“光盤(pán)行動(dòng)”(Clear Your Plate Campaign)略加評(píng)論。
With large amounts of food thrown away each year, the problem of food waste is widespread in China. Last Spring Festival, my father invited several friends to dinner in a restaurant. My father ordered a lot to show respect and display generosity.
What surprised me was he ordered an extra dish before we could finish all! When we stood up to leave, there were many dishes unfinished. Out of embarrassment, my father was reluctant to take the leftovers home. Later, we all shared the opinion that it was a great waste.
Recently, the Clear Your Plate Campaign started nationwide. I firmly believe that if everyone does his bit, the food waste will be significantly reduced.
n the bike, and enjoy your trip.
Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
2019江蘇高考英語(yǔ)作文超精講
我對(duì)作文的一點(diǎn)看法
轟轟烈烈的英語(yǔ)考試?yán)箩∧涣?。目前我只知道?xiě)作題，這已經(jīng)足夠了。下面我就來(lái)寫(xiě)一篇吧。
總體感覺(jué)是：今年作文有話(huà)可寫(xiě)，但不容易寫(xiě)好，因?yàn)樾枰e累不少和銷(xiāo)售有關(guān)的表達(dá)。譬如如何表達(dá)商品銷(xiāo)售、產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量、誤導(dǎo)等等。還有邏輯，如果你寫(xiě)反對(duì)，譬如如何論證排名會(huì)誤導(dǎo)消費(fèi)者，你就要舉例等，蠻考驗(yàn)考生的邏輯思維能力的。
今年作文和模塊四的第一單元話(huà)題比較靠近的，這個(gè)模塊的詞塊對(duì)寫(xiě)作也有很大幫助。利弊類(lèi)作文江蘇已經(jīng)出現(xiàn)過(guò)兩年了，對(duì)于掌握了這兩年范文的考生，起碼在正文的結(jié)構(gòu)上胸有成竹。
另外，本次作文題一個(gè)特點(diǎn)是：
短文簡(jiǎn)單易懂。這和去年的是一樣(去年對(duì)話(huà)也是一看就懂，短小，不浪費(fèi)時(shí)間)。這就是提示我們，平時(shí)練習(xí)不要在提供的短文上設(shè)置難度，尤其不可有生詞，長(zhǎng)度和難度是今后命題的一個(gè)重點(diǎn)。
過(guò)幾天我會(huì)就整套試卷來(lái)一個(gè)全方位評(píng)析，包括寫(xiě)作。本篇只說(shuō)如何寫(xiě)。
注意：范文屬于本人寫(xiě)作王中王一書(shū)，版權(quán)所有，請(qǐng)勿商用。
2018江蘇考生注意：現(xiàn)在可以準(zhǔn)備六級(jí)考試了，我明天晚上在滬江直播間公益講座，談六級(jí)備考(翻譯、寫(xiě)作、閱讀)，請(qǐng)關(guān)注我微信朋友圈通知。文末有說(shuō)明。
題目
第五部分：書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿(mǎn)分25分)
請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。
Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny
Our family will go on a trip next month and need asuitcase. Two days ago. Mom asked me to find relevant information on theinternet. But the information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. Thisafternoon, Mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.
Su Hua 6 July, Sunny
This morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complaineda lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. Iwas puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上述利用排名( ratings)進(jìn)行消費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象;
2.談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M(fèi)排名，然后用2-3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);
3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
一、如何寫(xiě)概括：
1.題干的關(guān)鍵詞
關(guān)鍵詞：排名( ratings)進(jìn)行消費(fèi)，這就是概括的核心。
2.段落的關(guān)鍵詞
對(duì)于記敘文，一般有兩種情況，一是舉例;二是通篇一個(gè)故事。對(duì)于前者，只需要知道例子說(shuō)明什么論點(diǎn)，對(duì)于后者，需要知道主要角色做了什么事，帶來(lái)什么結(jié)果。
結(jié)合題干可知，要求概括現(xiàn)象，即兩個(gè)例子說(shuō)明了什么現(xiàn)象。切忌寫(xiě)例子里面的每個(gè)人發(fā)生了什么事。
兩個(gè)故事都是對(duì)ratings的評(píng)價(jià)，第一個(gè)的評(píng)價(jià)：like it; 第二個(gè)評(píng)價(jià)：complaining。
3.關(guān)鍵詞的替換
1. like it--> produce positive effects, a good impression
2. complain --> don’t meet needs, negativ eeffects, mislead
基本上概括不需要很復(fù)雜的句型，主要是把大意說(shuō)明白：
先看2015年真題概括示范：
The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It notonly affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The threeselections presented above are typical examples.
我的寫(xiě)法：
Ratings for commodities are a double-edged sword.They can help consumers make sound decisions, but sometimes mislead them and bring about complaints. The two stories presented above are typical examples. (30個(gè)詞)
我的心得：
針對(duì)現(xiàn)象的概括，不要具體寫(xiě)內(nèi)容，重點(diǎn)是：現(xiàn)象是什么，一般都是什么趨勢(shì);結(jié)果或評(píng)價(jià)是什么，一般都是帶來(lái)什么影響，支持或反對(duì)。
二、如何寫(xiě)正文
談利弊的文章，江蘇已經(jīng)有兩年了，分別是2016年的網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票和2014年的漢語(yǔ)詞典是否可以有英語(yǔ)單詞。如果考生熟悉的話(huà)，會(huì)容易上手。
思維：我這里以反對(duì)為例：
1.從政府角度(可能涉及到法規(guī)，監(jiān)管)：
缺乏具體法規(guī)(there areno laws or policies and supervision)來(lái)規(guī)范市場(chǎng)排名
2.從商家的角度(可能涉及到責(zé)任)：
過(guò)多廣告投入，而不是質(zhì)量(give priority to ads)
3.從個(gè)人角度：
盲目隨大流(follow the crowd blindly)
思維有了，但還需要整合的：
前兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)可以合并，政府缺少法規(guī)，導(dǎo)致商家可以不擇手段來(lái)提高排名。其實(shí)也可以舉例，譬如百度競(jìng)價(jià)排名，但寫(xiě)起來(lái)不容易。
關(guān)鍵是如何論證消費(fèi)者只是盲目隨大流，考生可能有兩種思考：
1.消費(fèi)者想當(dāng)然認(rèn)為排名代表了質(zhì)量—》實(shí)際上質(zhì)量高的很多產(chǎn)品因?yàn)橥度氩桓邿o(wú)法參加排名
2. 消費(fèi)者想當(dāng)然認(rèn)為排名代表了受歡迎度—》實(shí)際上產(chǎn)品只是定制部分消費(fèi)者的，他們的體驗(yàn)被夸大而影響別人
第一個(gè)論據(jù)和前面第一個(gè)論點(diǎn)重復(fù)了，因?yàn)榍懊嬲f(shuō)的是質(zhì)量，這里還是說(shuō)質(zhì)量;第二個(gè)論據(jù)就比較切合文章的第二個(gè)例子：the food was not to our taste.
I don’t support such ratings. First, the absence of policies and supervisions allows producers to earn high ratings by all means. Chances are that top priority is given to advertisement, which is an open invitation to misleading information. Eventually, ratings rely heavily on investment inadvertisement rather than the quality of services. Besides, it is not uncommon for individuals to follow the crowd blindly without critical thinking.They take it for granted that ratings definitely equal popularity. Actually, many products are targeted at special consumers, whose experience tends to be exaggerated and influences others.
So, it is safe to conclude that ratings of purchases, if not handled properly, weigh against the development of a healthy market and cause unfair marketcompetitions
(正文130個(gè)詞)
Tips:
1.the absence of…缺乏
也可以用：There is no…，但是這個(gè)句型我比較喜歡用抽象名詞作主語(yǔ)來(lái)替換，這樣就省去了一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。
2.allow sb to do…這里表達(dá)的是“使某人……”。表達(dá)使動(dòng)概念，不一定用make。
3.by all means無(wú)論如何。
實(shí)際上這里我本來(lái)用by hook or by crook(不擇手段)，但考生考場(chǎng)上很難想到，而且不能保證閱卷人第一眼能識(shí)別出來(lái)，就舍棄了。
4.chances are that…有可能
這是我代替it is likely that..的一個(gè)句型，超級(jí)順手
5.表示重視的詞組：give top priority to…
此類(lèi)詞組一共有32組，請(qǐng)參看本文：
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6.be an open invitation to很大的誘因
這是教材模塊7的一個(gè)詞塊，被我代替cause, be responsible for
7.rely heavily on過(guò)度依賴(lài)于
8.rather than不是
9. it is not uncommon for…對(duì)于……是一個(gè)常見(jiàn)的現(xiàn)象
10. follow the crowd隨大流
11. critical thinking批判思維
12. take it for granted that…想當(dāng)然認(rèn)為
13. be targeted at目標(biāo)在于
14. tend to往往
15. it is safe to conclude that…可以穩(wěn)妥得出這樣結(jié)論……
16. if not handled properly，省略句結(jié)構(gòu)
17. weigh against對(duì)……不利
末段也是借鑒2016年和2014年的范文：
In short, internet voting, to someextent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted.Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in oursociety should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere andearnest.
So, it’s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitatesdaily communication.
完整的文章：
Ratings for commodities are a double-edged sword.They can help consumers make sound decisions, but sometimes mislead consumers and bring about complaints. The two stories presented above are typical examples.
I don’t support such ratings. First, the absence of policies and supervisions allows producers to earn highratings by all means. Chances are that top priority is given to advertisement, which is an open invitation tomisleading information. Eventually, ratings rely heavily on investment inadvertisement rather than the quality of services. Besides, it is not uncommon for individuals to follow the crowd blindly without critical thinking.They take it for granted that ratings definitely equal popularity. Actually, many products are targeted at special consumers, whose experience tends to be exaggerated and influences others.
So, it is safe to conclude that ratings of purchases, if not handled properly, weigh against the development of a healthy market and cause unfair marketcompetitions