2018高考英語滿分作文匯總及賞析
2018高考英語滿分作文匯總及賞析
2018高考英語滿分作文匯總及賞析
2018年高考英語滿分作文匯總及賞析，趕快收藏起來!經(jīng)典的句式背下來，今后作文用到就是加分項哦!
2018年新課標(biāo)全國卷I
【試題回顧】假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 到達(dá)時間;2. 合適的禮物;3. 餐桌禮儀。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
試題分析
書面表達(dá)具有很強(qiáng)的開放性和選擇性，給予考生暢所欲言的空間，擺脫單一方法，唯一答案的思維模式，在展示多彩思維活動的同時，真正考查了考生語言能力、文化意識、思維品質(zhì)和學(xué)習(xí)能力，讓考生感受英語學(xué)習(xí)的趣味與魅力，突出英語學(xué)科的獨(dú)有特征。
2018年全國卷I書面表達(dá)體裁為應(yīng)用文電子郵件，內(nèi)容為回復(fù)外國朋友Terry的郵件，向其介紹在中國家庭做客方面的相關(guān)習(xí)俗。要求文中涵蓋試題給出的三方面內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，即到達(dá)時間、合適的禮物和餐桌禮儀。該題型和內(nèi)容設(shè)計緊密聯(lián)系考生實(shí)際，但是，餐桌禮儀這個普通得再普通不過的日常小節(jié)反而在生活中被很多中學(xué)生忽略了。如果沒有跨文化對比凝練出的思維品格和文化素養(yǎng)的意識，學(xué)生很難在短時間內(nèi)寫出中國老百姓的餐桌禮儀文化。
例如受邀赴宴客人可以準(zhǔn)時到達(dá)但切忌過早到達(dá)。外地客人所帶禮物常見為能體現(xiàn)客人當(dāng)?shù)靥厣奈锲贰５⒁?，傳統(tǒng)的中國人收到禮物后一般不會當(dāng)著客人的面打開。中國餐桌為圓桌，正對門的位置為上座，一般為長者位置。 中國人特別尊敬長輩，用餐時，需等長輩先動筷子。吃飯時不得發(fā)出聲響，強(qiáng)調(diào)“食不語寢不言”等。中國地域廣文化差異也很大，給予思維發(fā)散的考生提供了充分表達(dá)自己的空間和機(jī)會。
在宣傳中國習(xí)俗文化的同時，對考生的跨文化意識、思維品質(zhì)提出了更高的要求，鼓勵考生站在外國人的角度講中國習(xí)俗特色，積極調(diào)動語言，闡明事實(shí)，表明差異。
思路點(diǎn)撥
本文是一篇電子郵件類應(yīng)用文寫作。餐桌禮儀也是考生比較熟悉的話題。成文時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：
一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全：
1.到達(dá)時間;2.合適的禮物;3.餐桌禮儀。
二、時態(tài)：
主要用一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時;
三、人稱：
第二、三人稱。
四、注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)母呒壴~匯、短語或句型，以提高作文的水平;
五、適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞和插入語，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
1. 瀏覽信息要點(diǎn)。
2. 三個任務(wù)點(diǎn)，第一段內(nèi)容：問候?qū)Ψ?，馬上呈現(xiàn)對方所涉及的話題，拜訪中國家庭，做客時間的要求和忌諱! 第二段內(nèi)容：做客拜訪的合適禮物，可以適當(dāng)延展，初次拜訪，親密朋友之間拜訪，二次拜訪，家庭情況適合的禮物，通用的禮物等。第三段：table manners,可以描述兩三個通常的中國人的餐桌禮節(jié)和忌諱的地方，有鮮明特色之處，最后一句表達(dá)祝愿。
3. 時態(tài)，給對方的建議和說明，用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述風(fēng)俗禮儀這是客觀規(guī)律性的東西，用一般現(xiàn)在時。
4. 頭腦風(fēng)暴短語、句型結(jié)構(gòu)，開始打草稿。
5. 行文。
6. 檢查拼寫和語法。
滿分作文
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
素材積累
做客禮儀
1. 預(yù)先約定一個時間以便對方事先作好安排。如果事先已經(jīng)約定好了時間，就應(yīng)遵守約定，準(zhǔn)時到達(dá)，如需提早十分鐘二十分鐘之內(nèi)可以接受，不要遲到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好準(zhǔn)備。這是一個基本禮節(jié)問題。
2.如果有專屬地域文化特色的禮物是最好的。如果朋友家有長輩，帶點(diǎn)煙酒和茶葉或一些老人家用的保健品等;如果朋友家有小孩，帶點(diǎn)兒童玩具或買箱牛奶，然后加點(diǎn)茶葉啥的;不要送鐘、梨、傘等這些東西，被認(rèn)為不吉祥。
3.主人會請客人入座上席，再請長輩入座客人旁。入座的時侯要從椅子的左邊進(jìn)入。在中餐結(jié)束時，筷子應(yīng)整齊地放在靠碗右邊的桌上，并應(yīng)等客人們都放下筷子以后，主人示意離席后方可以離開，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，這樣做是很沒禮貌的表現(xiàn)。
常用詞語和句子
準(zhǔn)時： on time/punctually
餐桌禮儀：table manners
合適的、恰當(dāng)?shù)模篴ppropriate
拜訪：pay a visit to
You are supposed/expected/required to do…
It' s a good idea to…
It' s appropriate/suitable to do …
It' s sensible/reasonable/advisable to do …
It' s good manners to do …
It' s noteworthy that…
I think it would be more helpful if you could do…
It would be wise of you to…
It' s desirable to do …
It' s inappropriate to do …
It' s impolite to do…
It' s unwise/inadvisable to do …
Never (助動詞/系動詞/情態(tài)動詞)主語+謂語動詞…
It' s not suitable for you to do…in such a situation.
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2018年新課標(biāo)全國卷II
【試題回顧】你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英語短片Growing Together，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展;2. 放映時間、地點(diǎn);3. 歡迎對短片提出意見。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
試題分析
2018年高考英語書面表達(dá)體裁為通知，替學(xué)校的“英語天地”邀請學(xué)生看英文短片Growing together。繼2015年，2016年，2017年連續(xù)三年考查信件認(rèn)識人寫信之后，全國二卷考查了應(yīng)用文中的另一典型體裁，內(nèi)容為邀請電影相關(guān)的時間，地點(diǎn)的通知。學(xué)生對該題材和內(nèi)容熟悉，對詞匯的要求也相對基礎(chǔ)。
縱觀全國II卷英語書面表達(dá)，從題材上來講，除了2014年考查了記敘文，十年中九年均考查了應(yīng)用文，應(yīng)用文占90%。所以考生在高考的英語寫作的準(zhǔn)備中應(yīng)當(dāng)把重心放在應(yīng)用文上，熟練掌握英語應(yīng)用文寫作的幾個相關(guān)專項，并且熟識高考英語基礎(chǔ)詞匯。
2009-2018年高考英語新課標(biāo)卷II書面表達(dá)
寫作點(diǎn)撥
英語書面通知的時態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般將來時為主，多使用被動語態(tài)、簡單句。在通知中不應(yīng)當(dāng)過度的使用較復(fù)雜的詞語和讀起來拗口的句子。
第二個注意點(diǎn)：層次一定要清晰，一個層次要表達(dá)一件事情，使人看起來一目了然。
滿分范文
Notice
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
The Student Union
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2018年新課標(biāo)全國卷III
【試題回顧】假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動情況。請給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 學(xué)校的體育場館;2. 主要的運(yùn)動項目;3. 你喜歡的項目。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右：2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
思路點(diǎn)撥
本題作文為提綱式作文，形式依然是書信，即給英國朋友Peter介紹學(xué)校體育運(yùn)動情況，屬于學(xué)校生活話題。這一話題貼合學(xué)生生活的實(shí)際，學(xué)生并不陌生，有話可說。
首先可以介紹學(xué)校的體育場館，場館的位置，大小，開放時間等等。然后簡要介紹學(xué)校主要開設(shè)的體育項目有哪些，可挑選一到兩個做詳細(xì)介紹，如學(xué)生的活動時間，活動形式，以及此類活動的好處等。再次簡要分析自己喜歡的體育項目是什么，并簡單分析喜歡的原因，自己從中得到的益處等。文章可主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱的方式來寫。
滿分范文
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
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2018年浙江卷
【試題回顧】第一節(jié) 應(yīng)用文寫作。假定你是李華，你校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。請你寫信應(yīng)聘，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 口語能力：2. 相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn);3. 應(yīng)聘目的。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
思路點(diǎn)撥
本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫應(yīng)聘信。
第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，學(xué)校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。要求寫封應(yīng)聘信，內(nèi)容包括：1.口語能力：2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn);3.應(yīng)聘目的。
第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞(組)。
第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。
第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。
范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【試題回顧】第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)。閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!" “OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 編織的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：
1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2. 至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
思路點(diǎn)撥
讀后續(xù)寫要求考生首先要讀懂已有信息，不僅能讀懂字面含義，還要理清文章的脈絡(luò)。續(xù)篇這篇短文時，考生要搞清楚故事的發(fā)展進(jìn)程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的變化等。在此基礎(chǔ)上，考生要順著文章的思路，根據(jù)線索，發(fā)揮想象，對其后的情節(jié)進(jìn)行合理預(yù)測，并用語言表達(dá)出來。
通過閱讀所給文章可知，父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個朋友家體驗(yàn)農(nóng)場生活，見父親和叔叔騎馬，兒子也很想騎，于是親身上馬體驗(yàn)。
根據(jù)第一段所給首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.這一句是故事發(fā)展的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，可從rabbit出現(xiàn)后帶來的反應(yīng)擴(kuò)展開，可以寫馬的反應(yīng)，也可以寫人的反應(yīng)，但要注意與第二段首句相呼應(yīng)。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.這一句呼應(yīng)前文Uncle Paul的叮囑——不要誤吃晚飯，可從如何尋路返回農(nóng)場去寫。
續(xù)寫時注意要使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;續(xù)寫完成后要用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。
滿分范文
Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!
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2018年天津卷
【試題回顧】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人興趣小組組長李津，你的美國朋友Chris就讀于天津某國際學(xué)校，他曾在機(jī)器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團(tuán)隊，參加即將與7月底在天津舉行的世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競賽。請根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。
(1)比賽的時間、地點(diǎn);(2)邀請他的原因;(3)訓(xùn)練計劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請他提出建議。
注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
...
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
思路點(diǎn)撥
本篇書面要求寫一封邀請信。寫作的時候要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：
一、動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：
1.代表興趣小組發(fā)出邀請;
2. 介紹比賽的時間、地點(diǎn)等安排;
3. 說明邀請他的原因，包括Chris曾在機(jī)器人技能競賽中獲獎;
4. 告訴他訓(xùn)練計劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請他提出建議。
二、寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，對于本文來說，以一般將來時為主，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
1. 代表興趣小組發(fā)出邀請;
2. 介紹比賽的時間、地點(diǎn)等安排;
3. 說明邀請他的原因，包括Chris 曾在機(jī)器人技能競賽中獲獎;
4. 告訴他訓(xùn)練計劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請他提出建議。
滿分范文
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
I' m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
06
2018年北京卷
【試題回顧】第一節(jié)(15分)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計劃明年來北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 表示歡迎;2. 推薦他上哪所大學(xué);3. 建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50;2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
...
Yours，
Li Hua
思路點(diǎn)撥
本文為提綱式作文，文章要求寫推薦信，為英國朋友介紹北京的大學(xué)。首先可以介紹一下寫作背景(Jim對中國文化感興趣，要來中國學(xué)習(xí))，表達(dá)歡迎。然后推薦一所大學(xué)，并簡要介紹推薦的原因(如大學(xué)的特色，可以學(xué)到什么等)。再次簡單介紹應(yīng)該做哪方面的準(zhǔn)備，如可以提前學(xué)習(xí)漢語，讀點(diǎn)有關(guān)中國傳統(tǒng)文化的書，了解中國的習(xí)俗，讓自己更好地適應(yīng)中國的生活。文章可采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱可以使用第二人稱。
滿分范文
Dear Jim,
I' m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is, perfect for you where you. can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【試題回顧】第二節(jié)(20分)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周接待外國學(xué)生，帶領(lǐng)他們體驗(yàn)中國茶文化的過程。
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。
思路點(diǎn)撥
本文為圖片介紹類作文，這類作文是根據(jù)給出的一幅或幾幅圖畫所提供的信息寫短文。此類題的體裁較廣泛，可以是記敘文、說明文，也可以是議論文。按照本文的要求可知，是寫一篇記敘文。
1. 認(rèn)真讀圖，把握中心。
根據(jù)提示可知，內(nèi)容是帶領(lǐng)外國學(xué)生體驗(yàn)中國茶文化的全過程，介紹了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的過程，所以這是這組圖畫所要表達(dá)的中心。
2.初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)。
在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。本文是講述上周發(fā)生的事情，故時態(tài)要以過去時為主，人稱是第一人稱，盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。
3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。
運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或短語正確表達(dá)各圖的意思。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。
4.反復(fù)審核，修改錯誤。
一篇文章寫好后，應(yīng)進(jìn)行檢查，看短文中是否有錯，如拼寫、用詞、時態(tài)、語態(tài)及表達(dá)方面的錯誤。5.宜詳則詳，該略則略。對于一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容，如果是文章必不可少的，在寫作過程中是不可將其忽略的。如果是可有可無的細(xì)節(jié)，則可視具體情況進(jìn)行增刪。據(jù)此，我們在讀圖時一定要注意閱讀各圖中的一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，看其是否影響文章的內(nèi)容。
滿分范文
Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.
On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.
In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.
At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.
亮點(diǎn)說明
巧妙使用定語從句，提升了文章檔次：
Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.
使用非謂語動詞，使句子表達(dá)更簡潔：
On arriving at the tea house…
I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,
Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture
holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.
使用倒裝句突出重點(diǎn)。
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.
使用it做形式主語，使表達(dá)更地道。
It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.
07
2018年江蘇卷
【試題回顧】書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
【寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個詞概括上述利用排名( ratings)進(jìn)行消費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象;2.談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M(fèi)排名，然后用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。
【寫作要求】1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3.不必寫標(biāo)題
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
思路點(diǎn)撥
今年作文仍然是讀寫作文，即先用30詞概括閱讀材料，然后針對材料中的話題寫一篇議論文談看法。首先要認(rèn)真閱讀兩段有關(guān)消費(fèi)排名現(xiàn)象及觀點(diǎn)的純文字材料，然后進(jìn)行比較和分析，表明態(tài)度，作出價值判斷。
文章首段要簡要介紹兩段材料，第一段材料為一對母子買旅行箱看了網(wǎng)上的評論，結(jié)果買回來的旅行箱質(zhì)量很好。第二段材料為一幫人去餐館吃飯，看了on-line rating，結(jié)果飯菜很不好吃，從而凸顯出online rating的不靠譜。
然后寫你對online rating的看法，表明觀點(diǎn)，注意用2-3個論據(jù)來支撐自己的看法。
文章屬于議論文，要注意主題句的使用，論點(diǎn)之間要注意有條理。文章可主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時，第三人稱來寫。
滿分范文
Possible version one:
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
Possible version two:
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay
for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
高考英語作文：書面表達(dá)話題(學(xué)校生活!)
高考英語作文：書面表達(dá)話題(學(xué)校生活!)
寫作話題1 學(xué)校生活(1)
一、話題單詞
1.subject n.科目
2.challenge n.挑戰(zhàn)
3.pressure n.壓力
4.competition n.比賽
5.experience n.經(jīng)驗(yàn);經(jīng)歷
6.activity n.活動
7.degree n.學(xué)位
8.examination n.考試，測試
9.inspire vt.鼓舞
10.invite vt.邀請
11.involve vt.包括
12.enrich vt.豐富
13.combine vt.聯(lián)合，結(jié)合
14.favourite adj.最喜歡的
15.meaningful adj.有意義的
二、話題短語
1.spare no effort不遺余力
2.be accustomed to習(xí)慣于
3.be addicted to沉迷于
4.make up one’s mind下決心
5.distinguish oneself使自己出眾
6.live an ideal life過著理想的生活
7.get into a bad habit染上壞習(xí)慣
8.care for喜歡
9.take an exam參加考試
10.take exercise鍛煉
三、提分句式
1.To my surprise，not only did she give me the confidence but also encouraged me to have a try. 使我意外的是，她不僅給我自信心，而且鼓勵我嘗試一下。
2.Only when you devote yourself to it can you enjoy the real pleasure of learning.
只有當(dāng)你真正投入的時候，你才能體會到學(xué)習(xí)的樂趣。
3.Besides, it is normal for me to feel nervous，because the exam is of great importance to me. 除此之外，我感到緊張是正常的，因?yàn)檫@次考試對我來說非常重要。
4.Firstly，as a student，the most important thing is to study，so it is necessary for all of you to build an effective method in your study.
首先，作為一名學(xué)生，最重要的事情是學(xué)習(xí)，因此你們所有人都有必要在學(xué)習(xí)中建立一個有效的方法。
5.We should form the habit of making plans for our study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment.
我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成制訂學(xué)習(xí)計劃的習(xí)慣，協(xié)調(diào)好學(xué)習(xí)和娛樂二者之間的關(guān)系。
6.(2017·河北衡水中學(xué)二調(diào)書面表達(dá))What I want to tell you is that it is common for Senior Three students to have an experience of depression.
我想告訴你的是高三學(xué)生有情緒低落期是正常的。
7.(2017·河北衡水中學(xué)二調(diào)書面表達(dá))Your attitude towards your grades has a great effect on your study，and confidence is the key to success. 對成績的態(tài)度對你的學(xué)習(xí)有很大的影響，自信是成功的關(guān)鍵。
8.(2017·河北衡水中學(xué)二調(diào)書面表達(dá))In conclusion，get rid of your pressure and work hard，and you will achieve your goal。
總之，擺脫壓力，努力學(xué)習(xí)，你會實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的。
四、話題寫作
(2017·貴陽一中第四次適應(yīng)性考試)假定你叫李華，你的外籍好友Mike在上次考試中發(fā)揮失常，成績不理想，現(xiàn)發(fā)來電子郵件向你傾訴他的憂慮。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給Mike回一封郵件安慰他。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.要保持良好的心態(tài);
2.找出考試失常的原因;
3.尋找有助于釋放壓力的方式。
注意：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫;
2.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
【參考范文】One possible version：
Dear__Mike，
Nice__to__read__your__email__today. I’m sorry to learn that you didn’t do well in that exam and that you are very worried about your study. Here is my advice for you.
First and foremost，it’s of great significance to keep a good state of mind，for everyone will experience failures in his life.Furthermore，you’d better find out the reasons why you failed and the mistakes you made.Try to make up for the knowledge you lack and learn skills in those areas.In addition，if you are really stressed，you’d better listen to music，take exercise and so on to release your pressure.More importantly，you are supposed to be more confident and study harder.By doing so you will make greater progress in your study.
Yours，
Li__Hua
寫作話題2 學(xué)校生活(2)
一、話題單詞
1.personality n.性格;個性
2.abundant adj.豐富的
3.firstclass adj.一流的
4.excellent adj.優(yōu)秀的
5.energetic adj.有活力的
6.improve=promote=strengthen v.
提高，加強(qiáng)
7.develop v.培養(yǎng)
8.encourage=motivate v.激發(fā)，鼓勵
9.ease=relieve=lighten v.減輕
10.patient adj.耐心的
11.values n.價值觀
12.moral n.道德觀
13.criticism n.批評
14.contribution n.貢獻(xiàn)
15.accomplish v.完成
二、話題短語
1.develop one’s confidence in培養(yǎng)對……的信心
2.share experience交流經(jīng)驗(yàn)
3.play an/a (important/active/great) role/part
起(重要的/積極的/巨大的)作用
4.skip school/a class逃學(xué)/課
5.rich in knowledge/experience知識/經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富
6.set/pursue a goal/higher standard
確立/追求目標(biāo)/更高的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
7.achieve/accomplish/attain the goal/aim/objective
達(dá)到目標(biāo)
8.overcome difficulties克服困難
9.owe the success/failure to把成功/失敗歸咎于
10.be faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty
面臨危險/困難
11.make much/little sense to sb.對某人來說很有/沒有意義
12.take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion參加運(yùn)動/活動/討論
13.realize/fulfill/achieve one’s dream
實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的理想
14.broaden one’s horizons開闊眼界
三、提分句式
1.(2017·濟(jì)寧一模書面表達(dá))Please take part in a wide variety of afterclass activities，which will broaden our horizon，enrich the school life and make us relaxed.
請積極參加各種各樣的課外活動，課外活動能夠讓我們開闊眼界，充實(shí)學(xué)校生活，還能使我們得到放松。
2.(2017·泰安檢測書面表達(dá))Only then did I realize that it was by getting involved in the competition that I gained more selfconfidence and enjoyed the pleasure of teamwork.
只有在那時我才意識到，正是通過參與比賽，我才獲得了更多的自信，享受到了合作的樂趣。
3.(2017·日照檢測書面表達(dá))What impresses me most is that our teacher always creates a kind of atmosphere where we can voice our opinions freely.
給我印象最深的是，我們老師總是營造一種我們可以自由交流看法的課堂氛圍。
4.(2017·贛州市適應(yīng)性考試書面表達(dá))In order to show the customs of our hometown，enrich the students’ cultural life our school has organized a photography exhibition with the theme of “love my hometown”.
為了展示我們家鄉(xiāng)的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣，豐富學(xué)生的文化生活，我們學(xué)校組織了主題為“我愛家鄉(xiāng)”的攝影展。
5.(2017·蕪湖市5月檢測書面表達(dá))It is an interesting and meaningful activity. When we are tired of studying, we can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe fresh air and relax ourselves.
這是一項有趣且有意義的活動。當(dāng)我們厭煩學(xué)習(xí)，我們可以去一個美麗的地方欣賞自然的美，呼吸新鮮空氣，放松自我。
6.(2017·贛州市適應(yīng)性考試書面表達(dá))Not only can this activity improve my sense of responsibility，but it also educates me to cherish today’s happy life.這次活動不僅提高了我的責(zé)任感而且教育我要珍惜今天的幸福生活。
7.My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can to make sure that I get a good education.
我的父母當(dāng)然很愛我，他們將做他們所能做的一切以確保我受到良好的教育。
8.She said that she and my schoolmates all wished me success, but it didn’t matter whether I would win or not.
她說她和我的校友們都希望我成功但是成功與否不重要。
9.I was so tired that I feel asleep the moment my head touched the pillow.
我太累了以至于我的頭一碰到枕頭我就睡著了。
四、話題寫作
(2017·廣東七校聯(lián)合體高三第二次聯(lián)考)假定你是高中學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim即將升入中國的一所高中學(xué)習(xí)，想讓你給他一些學(xué)習(xí)建議。請你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.與老師交流，征求老師意見;
2.上課積極參與討論，專心聽講，做好筆記;
3.課后積極完成作業(yè)，鞏固知識。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】One possible version：
Dear__Jim__，
?、貶aving learned that you’ll be a senior high school student, how delighted I am. In your last email you mentioned that you are confused about how to study well in senior high school.②Now, I’d like to share my study tips with you.
First, you’d better communicate with your teachers regularly. In this way, they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Second, why not involve yourself in each class actively, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later?Third, it’s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.
③I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.Best wishes!
Yours，
Li__Hua
【一句多譯】
?、買 am very delighted to know that you’ll be a senior high school student.
?、贏s to study, my suggestions are as follows.
③I sincerely hope that these suggestions will be of great use to you. Remember：where there is a will, there is a way.
寫作話題3 學(xué)校生活(3)
一、話題單詞
1.selflessness n.無私
2.entertainment n.娛樂
3.enlightening adj.給人啟迪的
4.talent n.才華
5.graduate v.畢業(yè)
6.celebrate v.慶祝
7.degree n.學(xué)位
8.independence n.獨(dú)立
9.stressful adj.有壓力的
10.tiring adj.累人的
11.exhausting adj.令人筋疲力盡的
12.boring adj.無聊的
13.potential adj.有潛力的
14.flexible adj.靈活的
15.competitive adj.競爭的
二、話題短語
1.engineer of the human souls人類靈魂的工程師
2.teaching method教學(xué)方法
3.loving and caring愛心
4.education for allround development全面發(fā)展的教育
5.develop our creative mind培養(yǎng)我們的創(chuàng)造性思維
6.widen one’s knowledge開闊視野
7.enrich one’s social and life experience豐富社會和生活閱歷
8.broaden one’s horizons開闊眼界
9.realize the value of life實(shí)現(xiàn)人生的價值
10.quality education素質(zhì)教育
11.make contribution to society對社會做出貢獻(xiàn)
12.go to college上大學(xué)
13.apply what I have learnt to my job把我所學(xué)的應(yīng)用在工作中
14.a sense of responsibility責(zé)任感
15.make use of利用
三、提分句式
1.Recently we have been occupied with the preparation for the coming “Foreign Language Festival”.
最近我們正忙著準(zhǔn)備即將到來的“外語文化節(jié)”。
2.Hardly had they got the news when some of my classmates signed up for it in groups immediately.
我們班一些同學(xué)一聽到消息，就馬上分小組報名參加。
3.I was wondering whether to participate when my English teacher came by, telling me that it was a good chance to display my talent. 我正在想是否參加，這時英語老師走了過來，告訴我這是我展示才華的好機(jī)會。
4.Before we left the centre, we had a photo taken to record the unforgettable experience，which gave us a good chance to build up courage and improve our sense of teamwork.
離開中心之前，我們拍照記錄這難忘的經(jīng)歷，這次經(jīng)歷給了我們一次增加勇氣、增強(qiáng)合作意識的好機(jī)會。
5.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things.
依我之見，學(xué)生應(yīng)該把學(xué)習(xí)、健康和安全放在首位。
6.Our teachers encourage us to take part in some social practice in our summer holidays, which they think can help us get fully developed.
我們的老師們鼓勵我們暑假期間參加一些社會實(shí)踐活動，他們認(rèn)為這有助于我們得到全面發(fā)展。
7.As a result, it was his encouragement that led to my success.
結(jié)果，正是他的鼓勵促成了我的成功。
8.It is for these reasons that I firmly believe that this rule will promote the learning atmosphere and our teamwork spirit.
正是由于這些原因我堅信這條規(guī)則將有利于營造我們的學(xué)習(xí)氛圍并培養(yǎng)我們的團(tuán)隊精神。
四、話題寫作
(2017·四川成都高中畢業(yè)班第一次診斷)假定你是李華，你校將于2018年元旦在學(xué)校體育館組織一次義賣活動。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你校外教John寫一封信，邀請他一同參加：
1.活動介紹(時間、地點(diǎn)、物品等);
2.活動意義;
3.盼回復(fù)參與意向。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù);
3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;
4.文中不得透露個人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
參考詞匯：義賣活動charity sale 體育館stadium
【參考范文】One possible version：
Dear__John，
How__is__everything__going?I have learned that you are enthusiastic about charity activities，so I’m writing to invite you to join us in a charity sale.
It will be held at the school stadium at 8 a.m. on New Year’s Day，2018, lasting 4 hours.A variety of items are welcomed, ranging from books, earphones, handcrafts to homemade cakes.
This activity can bring about various benefits.Not only can it improve our sense of responsibility but also develop our ability to design and organize activities.
I’d appreciate it if you can take part in the charity sale.Looking forward to your early reply!