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雅思寫作范文精講:在線購物

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       雅思寫作中經常會考到分析利弊的題目,比如在線購物的利弊,你知道該怎么寫嗎?下面小編就分享給大家。

  購物與金錢經常使用的英文短語和句型

  >> commodity

  = sth. that can be bought and sold

  商品的較正式說法

  例句

  Fish were a vital commodity in growing townsand cities where food supplies were a constantconcern.

  由于食品供應一直令人擔憂,在不斷發(fā)展的城鎮(zhèn)中魚是一種極為重要的商品。

  be acquisitive

  總想索取的,貪得無厭的

  例句

  She's an acquisitive person,always wanting to gain and possess new things.

  她是一個貪得無厭的人,總是想著去占有新的東西。

  常用聯(lián)想短語或句型

  >> vanity

  = being too interested in someone's own abilities or appearance

  虛榮心,自負

  例句

  Reece wants the job purely for the reason of vanity.

  瑞斯純粹是出于虛榮才想得到那份工作的。

  tighten one's belt

  節(jié)省開支

  例句

  Joel had to tighten his belt since he lost his job.

  因為丟了工作,喬爾要開始勒緊褲腰帶生活了。

  常見近義短語或句型

  >> do sth. on a shoe string

  = do sth. using very little money

  花很少的錢去做某事

  例句

  This business is run on a shoestring.

  這份生意是在精打細算的條件下完成的。

  cannot afford sth.

  買不起某物

  例句

  They can't afford such expensive holidays.

  他們承擔不起如此昂貴的假期旅行。

  常用聯(lián)想短語或句型

  >> be beyond sb. 's means

  = be too expensive for sb.

  超過了某人的消費能力

  例句

  The medical charges are beyond the means of needy families.

  對于那些需要幫助的家庭來說,昂貴的醫(yī)療費用只能讓他們望洋興嘆。

  be dirt-cheap

  非常便宜的

  例句

  The hotel we stayed in was dirt-cheap, but our room was very nice.

  雖然我們入住的酒店十分便宜,但房間環(huán)境卻非常好。

  常見近義短語或句型

  >> a bargain

  = a hover-than-usual price

  很便宜的

  例句

  These shoes are a bargain at just 15 pounds.

  這些低價鞋只賣15鎊。

  常用聯(lián)想短語或句型

  >> be undervalued

  = be considered to be worth less than sth. really is

  價值被低估的

  例句

  Smell is probably the most undervalued sense in many cultures.

  嗅覺大概是在很多文化中最被低估的一種感官。

  go on a shopping spree

  瘋狂購物

  例句

  Rasie went on a shopping spree this weekend.

  露絲這周末去商場大血拼了。

  常見反義短語或句型

  >> window-shopping

  = the activity of looking at things in shop windows but not buying anything

  只著櫥窗但不購買

  例句

  Window-shopping is fun for some and frustrating for others.光看不買的行為對一些人來說是種樂趣,而對另一些人來說則十分討厭了。

  keep track of sth.

  掌握某事物的動向

  例句

  Scarlett found it hard to keep track of her expenses.

  斯嘉麗發(fā)覺要找出她把錢都花在哪兒了可真是一件困難的事。

  常見反義短語或句型

  >> loss track of sth.

  = fail to keep track of sth.

  失去對某事物動向的了解

  例句

  Kaya never lost track of her favourite celebrities.

  凱亞對她最崇拜的偶像從來都是了如指掌。

  fall short

  不夠,缺少

  例句

  We tried to raise eighty thousand pounds,but unfortunately we fell short by about tenthousand.

  我們計劃募集到80,000英鎊的款額,但不幸的是,最終我們差了大約10,000鎊。

  常用聯(lián)想短語或句型

  >> fall short of one's expectations

  = is disappointing to someone

  未能達到某人的期望

  例句

  He kept falling short of my expectations.

  他總是達不到我對他的期望。

  Only... won't balk at this price.

  只有..才不會對這種價格望而卻步

  例句

  Only well-heeled business people won't balk at this price, especially when buyers can getjust 3 hours of battery life.

  只有(非常富有的人)才不會對這種價格望而卻步,尤其是這個產品只有3個小時的電池壽命。

  常見近義短語或句型

  >> a prohihitive price

  = a price that is too high for the average people

  價格過于高昂的

  例句

  The price of land in London is prohibtive.

  倫敦的地價過于高昂。

  covet sth.

  非常希望得到(別人已經擁有的東西)

  例句

  The laptop looks pretty cool and this is the closest I've ever got to actually coveting a Delllaptop.

  這款筆記本電腦看起來非常不錯,這回我真是頭一次想擁有一臺戴爾電腦。

  常用聯(lián)想規(guī)語或句型

  >> envy sb.

  = want very much to do sth. that sb. else does

  羨慕某人

  例句

  I envy people who are always optimistic.

  我很羨慕那些始終保持樂觀的人。

  financial support

  財務上的支持

  例句

  The UN provided financial support to the refugees.

  聯(lián)合國為難民提供經濟援助。

  常見近義短語或句型

  >> financial aid

  = money that an organisation or a government gives to a country or an area

  經濟援助

  例句

  Some people believe that the government should spend less on overseas financial aid.

  一些人認為政府應該減少在海外援助上的支出。

  常用聯(lián)想短語或句型

  >> financial issue

  = financial subject that people discuss

  有關財務或財政的議題

  例句

  Financial issues are critical to the government.

  財政問題對于政府而言很關鍵。

  keep up with the Joneses

  與他人去攀比

  例句

  This society has been having a "keeping up with the Joneses" complex for years and nowit's crashing down around its people.

  這個社會一直有著互相攀比的積習,并且現(xiàn)在人們已經在飽嘗這種惡習的后果了。

  常用聯(lián)想短語或句型

  >> peer pressure

  = the influence other people of your age have on the way you behave

  來自于同輩人的壓力

  例句

  Peer pressure can be very disorienting for children.

  來自于同輩的壓力很容易讓孩子們迷失方向。

  雅思寫作真題解析:傳統(tǒng)購物和網絡購物的優(yōu)劣對比

  一、Traditional shopping way 傳統(tǒng)的購物方式

  (一)Advantages優(yōu)勢

  1. Experience goods in person 親自感受產品

  2. Avoid being defrauded 避免上當

  3. Bargain with attendant 和服務員砍價

  4. Make decision after comparing goods 在比較過產品后決定購買

  5. Get goods, receipts, and invoices immediately 可以立即得到貨物、收據(jù)和發(fā)票

  6. A good chance for family members to communicate via items 是家庭成員通過貨物溝通的一個好機會

  7. Bridge generation gap and develop same aesthetic concept 解決代溝并培養(yǎng)相同的審美觀點

  8. A pastime for us to spend leisure time and ease pressure 可以作為一種消遣來打發(fā)閑暇時間而且可以緩解壓力

  9. An opportunity for parents to teach their children how to be thrifty 父母可以借此機會教孩子怎樣省錢

  10. An opportunity for children to teach their parents how to be fashionable 孩子可以借此機會教父母怎樣時尚

  (二)Disadvantages劣勢

  1. Labor-consuming and time-costing 耗體力、費時間

  2. The public tastes and styles are unified 公眾的品位與風格統(tǒng)一了

  3. Shopping expenses are mainly shouldered by men and they will be confronted with more serious economic burden.男性承擔了絕大多數(shù)的購物費用,他們要面臨更為嚴重的經濟負擔

  4. Buying some unnecessary bargains.買一些不需要的東西。

  二、 Other means 其它方式

  (一)Advantages 優(yōu)勢

  1. Effective and convenient 高效率、方便

  2. Effortlessly comparable 可以不費力氣的進行比較

  3. Extensive choices on intensive platform在密集的平臺上選擇廣泛的貨物

  4. Make barter dealing available 使得易貨貿易成為了可能

  5. Enable consumers to purchase items as a package 使得消費者可以一下買齊所有產品

  (二)Disadvantages

  1. Extra expenses are required 要花額外的費用

  2. Incomplete payment system 不完善的支付系統(tǒng)

  3. Adulterated goods 參雜使假的貨物

  4. Unsuitable for consumers to purchase the goods in eager demand 不適合消費者購買急需的產品

  5. Offending copy rights and patents 侵犯版權與專利

  6. Pirated misconducts can not be effectively avoided 盜版行為無法有效的避免

  7. Booking ticket by e-commerce may delay one’s scheduling 通過電子商務訂票會耽誤人的安排

  8. The information filed in e-commerce websites may reveal one’s privacy 存在電子商務網站的信息會透露隱私

  雅思大作文:大家對網上購物的態(tài)度

  2017年11月11日雅思大作文題目

  “ Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development?”

  雙十一當天的雅思作文問的是大家對網上購物的態(tài)度。由于互聯(lián)網的發(fā)展,現(xiàn)在很多人都不去商店而選擇在網上購物。那么,這個趨勢是好還是壞呢?

  本題是2014年11月22日,也就是3年前的原題重現(xiàn)。唐老師已經多次提醒各位烤鴨,最近雅思作文對2014年下半年及2015年上半年的原題復現(xiàn)率很高,請大家重點復習。

  “有了互聯(lián)網,我們就可以不(上班,上學,去博物館,去商店,去旅游......)”

  這一類話題,最近頻繁出現(xiàn),9月30日,10月5日,10月28日都與這個話題相關,詳細講解請點擊下方鏈接查看范文及解析。

  10月28日雅思大作文真題 | 人們可以在任何地方生活工作,這是好還是壞?

  10月5日雅思大作文真題 | 網絡時代我們不需要旅游了嗎?

  9月30日雅思大作文真題 | 網絡時代我們不需要上學上班了嗎?

  回頭談網上購物。其好處當然很多,比如便捷、節(jié)約時間、價格便宜,但壞處也是顯而易見的,比如看不見實物因此可能買到不適合自己的東西、沒有了一家人去商店購物的那種樂趣、網絡欺詐等??傮w來說,雖然我們不一定要依賴網上購物,但網上購物的確給我們購物提供了一種可以選擇的方式。

  老師筆記

  01

  Shopping at home used to be a dream of ours, but now it has become a reality in our life thanks to the rapid development of the Internet. Many people today prefer online shopping rather than going to stores.

  在家購物曾經是我們的夢想,但由于互聯(lián)網的迅速發(fā)展,現(xiàn)在它已經成為我們生活中的現(xiàn)實。今天許多人喜歡網上購物,而不是去商店。

  解析

  (1)本段為引入段,提出網上購物已經成為很多人的選擇。

  (2)reality 現(xiàn)實

  (3)prefer...rather than... 寧愿......而不是......

  02

  Online shopping has many advantages, especially when it is compared with the store shopping. Sitting comfortably at home, no matter how terrible the weather outside might be, and with a few simple clicks on our computer or smart phone screen, we can order almost everything we need from clothes to books and from electric appliances to air tickets. Then what we have to do is wait one or two days for the delivery of your order. The whole process is really easy and simple and thus can save us a lot of time, not to mention the reduced prices we often enjoy when we shop online.

  網上購物有許多優(yōu)點,尤其是當它與商店購物相比較時。舒舒服服地坐在家里,不管外面的天氣有多糟糕,只要簡單地在電腦或智能手機屏幕上敲幾下,我們就可以買到我們需要的任何東西,從衣服到書籍,從電器到機票,然后我們要做的就是等一兩天后訂單交付。整個過程非常簡單容易,因此可以節(jié)省我們很多時間,更不用說我們網上購物時還經常享受到降價。

  解析

  (1)本段論述網上購物的好處,主要論述其簡單容易,節(jié)約時間。

  (2) click 敲(鍵盤)

  (3) appliances 器具(尤其是電器)

  (4) delivery 交付,發(fā)送

  (5) process 過程

  (6) not to mention... 更不用提......

  03

  Yet online shopping may create problems, too. First, as we cannot see the transaction going on with our own eyes, we may likely buy something that does not really suit us. We often hear our friends complain that they have to alter their expensive clothes bought online because it is too long or too short. To make it worse, to return our buy and get a different one is always a long and complicated process, which means we will lose the time we have gained from the online shopping. Secondly, unlike the store shopping, online shopping deprives us of the opportunities to spend a quality time together with our family members. I can still remember the excitement when my parents decided to take me to the supermarket to do the weekend shopping.

  然而網上購物也可能帶來問題。首先,由于我們不能親眼看到交易的進行,我們可能會買一些不適合我們的東西。我們經常聽到朋友抱怨他們不得不改變他們在網上購買的昂貴的衣服,因為它們過長或過短。更糟糕的是,退貨換貨是一個長期而復雜的過程,這意味著我們將失去我們在網上購物節(jié)約下來的時間。其次,與商店購物不同的是,網上購物剝奪了我們與家人共度一段美好時光的機會。我還記得以前父母決定帶我去超市周末購物時的興奮心情。

  解析

  (1)本段論述網上購物可能帶來的壞處。首先是可能買到不喜歡的商品,其次是網絡購物讓我們享受不到一家人外出購物的樂趣。

  (2) transaction 交易

  (3) alter 改變

  (4) buy (n.)所購買的東西

  (5) deprive somebody of... 剝奪某人某物

  04

  To sum up, the Internet does provide us with a new and convenient way of shopping, but we should not completely rely on it. We may opt for online shopping when it is necessary, yet I believe the brick and mortar stores will never be replaced by online stores because of the unique shopping experience they offer us.

  總之,互聯(lián)網確實給我們提供了一種新的、便捷的購物方式,但我們不應該完全依靠它。如果有必要,我們可以選擇網上購物,但我相信實體商店能夠給我們提供獨特的購物體驗,因此永遠不會被網上商店取代。

  解析

  (1)本段為結尾段,提出自己的觀點:網上購物是一種新的選擇,但商店購物可能永遠也不會消失。

  (2)provide 提供

  (3)brick and mortar store 實體商店

  (4)unique 獨特的

  雅思寫作之購物詞匯大全

  (一) 購物方式與消費者類型

  1. Traditional shopping way 傳統(tǒng)購物方式

  2. E-commerce 電子商務

  3. Purchasing from digital television station/ Internet/ radio/ mobile phone platform 通過電視臺/ 因特網/ 廣播/ 手機平臺進行購買

  4. Direct sale 直銷

  5. Pyramid economy 傳銷

  6. Neighborhood service 小區(qū)服務

  7. Cyber ordering 網絡訂購

  8. Shopping mania 購物狂

  9. Buying in person 親自購買

  10. Buying in group 團購

  11. Buying through brokers 通過中介購買

  12. Sensible shopper 理智消費者

  13. Bargain seeker 專門購買打折產品的人

  14. Extravagant buyer 的購物者

  15. Window shopper 只逛不買的人

  (二) 購物場所與支付方式

  1. Stall 攤位

  2. Store 商店

  3. Boutique 專營店

  4. Department store 大商場

  5. Shopping centre 購物中心

  6. Shopping mall 綜合性購物區(qū)

  7. Fan store 愛好者商店

  8. Shopping plaza 購物廣場

  9. Supermarket 超級市場

  10. Superstore 超級商場

  11. Flea market 跳蚤市場

  12. Fair 集市

  13. Pay by cash/ credit card/ debit card/ cash card 通過現(xiàn)金/ 信用卡/借記卡/ 現(xiàn)金卡消費

  (三)購物類別

  1. Necessity 日常用品

  2. Clothing 衣物

  3. Accessories 飾品

  4. Home appliance 家用電器

  5. Cosmetics 化妝品

  6. Education products (magazines/ fanzines/ prose/ essay/ novel/ poem/ documentary/ travelogue/ reference books/ newspapers/ cassettes/ software) 教育產品(雜志/ 愛好者雜志/ 散文/ 論說文/ 小說/ 詩歌/ 記錄片/ 游記/ 參考書/ 報紙/ 磁帶/ 軟件)

  7. Decorations (房間)裝飾物

  8. Information and games (mobile Phone Musica/ games/ subscribing messages) 信息與游戲(手機背景音樂/ 游戲/ 訂閱短信)

  注:在下完材料后,同學們會發(fā)現(xiàn)Musica這個詞劃了橫線,但它的拼寫沒有任何問題,應該是系統(tǒng)的識別能力問題,另外要注意,這是個專利名詞,首字要大寫。

  9. Sundries 零碎物品

  10. Toilet articles 衛(wèi)生用品

  11. Antique 古董


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